The point is to give you help to get better as an artist. Let me help you with some advice:
1. NEVER swipe logos or even portions of a logo. It's going to get called out (and even moreso on a message board specializing in logo design) not to mention unethical.
2. Take your time and flush out an idea. That Acclaim "logo" you did is garbage compared to say the Blockbuster logo. Do your homework; SKETCH ideas. Things that may not work for one item may be referred to when you do another.
3. Color balance and font choices are very important in creating wordmarks. Again, the earlier works you had posted were so much more flushed out and involved compared to what's being posted.
There are some decent ideas here. Just step back, take your time and put a little more effort in this.