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  1. Brilliant series. Looking forward to seeing what you do with LSU
  2. Super slick. Love the presentation and all the individual elements themselves. Feels like an existing, lived-in league.
  3. I like the boldness of these so far. Keep em coming! From a presentation standpoint, I'd consider doing something to separate your uniforms from the background a bit more. Because this template uses the "invisible body" concept, those places where a busy background shows through and around the uniform makes it a bit hard to see and appreciate. Maybe a layer of semi-transparent white on top of the background?
  4. This is BRILLIANT. I could maybe finally root for the Browns. That said, I agree with the earlier comment that he's still a bit Mr. Magoo-looking. Maybe elongate it a bit and make it not so squat. He's looking a bit bald and round right now. See if you can get a sideburn or something indicating that there is indeed some hair up there, just not a lot of it. And the eye needs a bit more work so that it looks like an eye, and not a squint. It all comes together in that one point which makes it look like folds of skin rather than an eye and brow. Only nitpicking this because I think this is worthy of being perfected and presented to the actual team. I think it's the one concept they'd possibly consider that isn't the brownie or a bulldog or a Pantone square.
  5. These are all rock solid, but the Revolution overcoat is particularly inspired.
  6. Late to the party. These are great from start to finish. Looks like a real, existing league.
  7. Agreed. I think you can flip it to better match the original lightning angle and it'll still read as a Blues logo legacy.
  8. 49ers-Cowboys. Penguins-Flyers Cavs-Warriors Arsenal-ManU
  9. Definitely the classic-er Jets logo. The new one is just so bland and static and doesn't foster any sort of emotion or excitement. And that original Jets logo (along with the Nordiques and Whalers logos) are deserving of eventually earning Stanley Cup success. (Sabres and Canucks have at least had their shots in the finals)
  10. I like the overall look of the Sharks, but my first impression is that it's a slug crawling across the logo. Maybe try making the top end of the S a shark's head instead of the backwards fin, and then move the fin to the top left curve of the S, but facing the way it would naturally face.
  11. This series is improbably good. Improbable in that I'd have lost money betting on if these logos could be combined in any interesting way. Favorite series going right now. More please!
  12. Looks great overall! Incredibly dynamic. The only thing I'm still not sold on is the crest. The LA still feels unbalanced and like it's sliding or falling off the rest of the logo! What does it look like when you slant both the letters of LA? Make it basically italic. LA That way, the top of the A is closer to the point of the crest. In fact, I'd try slanting the LA enough to where the top of the A lands where the center point of the crest is.
  13. Agreed with all the comments above. Some really good ideas you've shown so far, but you need to clean up the presentation. It's hard to give good C&C if you don't know whether a problem with a design is at the design stage, or if it's just sloppy work. Great start, though!
  14. uniform design

    Kings looking great. I don't have access to your original look at the moment, but this feels significantly different than what I remember. I recall the Kings being one of the teams I wasn't as sold on as the rest, but you seem to have fixed that with this version!