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Everything posted by Jake3.roo

  1. March Madness by Nike (Villanova)

    I would simplify that V on the shorts to have no serifs and be more implied and be a negative space shape rather than a logo.
  2. MLB | Seattle Mariners Rebrand

    I agree with this. Also, make it a little more bold, and compress it horizontally.
  3. I actually like that look, though I think it works best with thicker outlines.
  4. The Battle of Seattle

    There's your winner. I personally prefer it without the greensilver, and I think that the logo works best when there's a dark color as the outline of the sea lion+trident, and then a light color in the middle, so I would flip the colors on the teal jersey. I think that the set looks cleanest when it's only teal and white, but this set looks more cohesive and it feels like a more separate brand from the rest of the league.
  5. NFL Logos by MCrosby - PROJECT COMPLETE

    Let's also not ignore the possibility of Mexico City getting a team in the future...
  6. sportstemplates.com template review?

    I highly recommend this one from @r3g . It doesn't have a back of the jersey, but it's really good and really easy to use.
  7. NFL Logos by MCrosby - PROJECT COMPLETE

    I've commented on here fairly often and I want to leave mcrosby with a huge thanks and congratulations for not only undertaking the task of redesigning 32 logos, but sharing them and being open to suggestions. With that, top 5: 1. Vikings 2. 49ers 3. Rams 4. Dolphins 5. Broncos
  8. NFL Logos by MCrosby - PROJECT COMPLETE

    That is absolutely beautiful. I think it needs an eye though.
  9. The Battle of Seattle

    sparky, I think you knocked it out of the park with that sea lion logo. However, I think the logo looks best in the original 1-color form. If there was some way to incorporate that logo that'd be awesome and it'd make for a very clean uniform. My ideas for color palette are: -Teal and white (only teal and white. Doesn't look too much like the sharks, very clean.) -Light teal/Navy/Vintage White -SIlverblue/Teal/white
  10. 2018-19 Utah Jazz "City" Uniforms concept

    I agree with the notion that the lighter color should be on top. What if the color was a blue-purple middleground? Would that work or would it look to weird?
  11. NFL Logos by MCrosby - PROJECT COMPLETE

    I agree. Before this thread I wouldn't have thought that the (insert team here) logo was able to be improved but mcrosby has proven me wrong many times. There's a way to improve upon the falcons logo, but this isn't it.
  12. USA Curling Logo Concept

    Either get rid of it or make it solid blue. I vote the former, but it's up to you.
  13. Winter Olympics Concept Series - Calgary 2042

    i agree with Dan O'Mac on this one. The rest have been phenomenal, (flagstaff being my favorite), but Calgary feels, I don't know, wrong. The black shape takes over the rest of the logo, and the lines don't feel smooth or even. It has a great unbalance and lack of structure, which is weird considering that's something I feel you've done fantastically through this series.
  14. MN Vikings Logo Redesign

    I agree with chromatic, also add more definition and detail to the beard, because the huge yellow space clashes with the detail in the hair.
  15. City/State Color Identities

    colorado could be a dark purple/maroon and light blue
  16. Atlanta Falcons Logo Concept

    Agreed. The falcon-F redundancy is stupid. However, all things considered, the combination of eras that A4A was able to produce is really good, because my problem with the old logo was that it was too static, and i didn't like how un-falcon-like (focus being on the F, not the falcon) the new logo is. I would challenge A4A to stretch the back of the logo out a little bit to make it more of a falcon-like shape. and mcrosby- the Eagles E is genius because it doesn't take away from the regular design at all, and as an eagles fan, this is a completely objective opinion
  17. The Battle of Seattle

    The branch guy would work better on a non-green background. As of now, it's a little hard to differentiate and makes it a little confusing.
  18. American Volleyball Associaton - Los Angeles

    I love the set, but i wonder if the net in the background (for the secondary) could be symmetrical. It distracts from the rest of the logo and creates unnecessary movement.
  19. NFL Logos by MCrosby - PROJECT COMPLETE

    Ok I've been commenting regularly on this thread, but I'm going to give one big C&C dump. Ravens- good update, checkerbeak is a little much, but otherwise looks much more fierce. Bills- fantastic update, Panthers- I would rework the face, especially the eyes. It doesn't look quite right to me. Bears- great update, but in my opinion, the wishbone C and the bear always looked best as two separate logos. Bengals- They need a tiger. The C feels too boring for them. Browns- definitely better than what they have now Cowboys- Eh. Go birds. Broncos- Lions- good update Packers- lateral move, not much of a change. Colts- Jaguars- Chiefs- Simplify. It looks beautiful but a lot of that detail gets lost at a smaller scale, also, it would look better imo. Chargers- Rams- Dolphins- Vikings- Patriots- Perfect update, I can't see a universe where the patriots ditch blue but your Pat looks great. Saints- I like it, I guess. I can't ditch the idea of the old one but this small change is cool NY Giants- lateral move, I feel like it could be less dramatic. NY Jets- Raiders- Eagles- I wrote more about it in an earlier post, but I think that your update loses some of the aggressiveness and ferocity that the old logo has. Also I don't like the bell, the line widths are too small, and they create points of tension and draw the attention away from the eagle itself. I think a better route to go would be modernizing this logo. Steelers- see Saints 49ers- Redskins tails- Great use of the DC flag.
  20. Colorado Avalanche Logo Concept

    I see two problems with this logo: a) there's too much empty space. 'b) the tree is too small and skinny to be of significance. It also creates weird tension at the points where it a l m o s t touches but doesn't. My solution: kill two birds with one stone. Make the tree bigger. Sure it'll look slightly less like an A because the stroke will be thinner. ut if you also fill that empty space it'll be more cohesive.
  21. Shoney's has an updated logo

    Exactly what I was thinking. It has the same fun feel of the old one, while definitely looking more cleaned up and modern. It looks so much less robotic than the other one.
  22. Shoney's has an updated logo

    Hold on, the font on that billboard is different than the ones seen above. It's also better than both of them.
  23. TNF Color Rush by bbb

    I would argue that the "volt blue" uniform that you rolled out is unreadable. I would say make the numbers white (or light blue) or change the jersey color.
  24. The New XFL

    That Destroyers logo is beautiful, but it could use some cleaning up. The waves should lose some detail, and so should the explosions. I would focus on trying to shift the focus to the actual ship. The team isn't called the "waves" or the "explosions". But overall, simplify. For more on simplifying, ask mcrosby.
  25. VP Panthers Logo

    I'm not a huge fan of that gradient. Especially for a high school sports team, that detail will get lost at a lower scale. One other nitpick I have is that the "Victoria park" should fit in between the P and S in Panthers. It will make the wordmark feel more cohesive and it can take up less space and put more focus on the panther and the design on the top.