derschwigg Posted August 28, 2014 Share Posted August 28, 2014 Awhile back, I was doing some contract work (which I've still not been paid...) for the Palo Alto Hackers - an independent league team in California. This was what I put together for them. My Portfolio | My Store | My Self Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted August 28, 2014 Share Posted August 28, 2014 I would fill all these gaps I've marked with black, plus the "H" misses the 3-D effect. I think it looks a little bit odd when the "S" seems to have it (intended or not) and the "H" is missing it.I really like the ram head, but I think it could need thicker (out)lines.I wouldn't have a problem with the very angular font you've created, although I'm not the biggest fan of it. But the "S" is, in my view, way to angular or blocky, simply because that (negative) effect has even enhanced due to the tilting of the whole "PALO ALTO HACKERS" lettering. It somehow looks strange, like as if you forgot to finish working on the curves in Illustrator.The "eyes logo" strongly reminds me of the Minor League Baseball Lake Elsinore Storm logo. Don't know if that was intentional or just a coincidence.Lake Elsinore Storm (alternate) logo “Never argue with an idiot! They will only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.” ––George Carlin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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