Real1 Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 Images removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 great work. No complaints heren i like how you put the bolt in the thunderbird and made it look natural MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
__taylorc Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 Love the concept, question did you use Illustrator to create the concepts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Real1 Posted September 1, 2014 Author Share Posted September 1, 2014 Yes, I used illustrator to flesh out the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LogoMark Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 I like how the bottom left curve of the neck followed the top curve of the "S" into the "U" on your drawing, but I like how the bird is centered over all three letters in your vector version, so if you could do both of those things I think It might be a little stronger. I also like how the blue/black is a little bit thicker around the eye and beak in your drawing, but overall this is awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Critical Thinker Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 Try swapping the red and black on the bird. I think it would look better with a darker band around the eye. It's _____________ and Toledo still sucks.[insert time here] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steveCRO Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 wooow! I love the end result on this one! There's only one thing I would like to see changed/enhanced (and I'm not really sure how) and that is the colored version of this logo. All in all, great job Real1! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 I'd interlock the "SU" logo a little more. As is I think it's a tad vertical. The primary is really good. It'd flow really nicely on a football helmet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Go Red Sox! Posted September 1, 2014 Share Posted September 1, 2014 I like the bird head a lot, but I would like it even more with thicker (out)lines – including the nostril.The "S" is pretty unproportional. Therefore I would fix the curves of the top part of the letter in order to make it look exactly like the bottom part.Other than that, it's a pretty good concept! Nicely done. “Never argue with an idiot! They will only bring you down to their level and beat you with experience.” ––George Carlin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Josh.0 Posted September 12, 2014 Share Posted September 12, 2014 Great work! Being a SUU alum and working closely with the graphic design team there I know the hatred they have for the current logo. It's awkward and difficult to work with in many aspects. That's one reason why they have black helmets with a watermark Thor on it. That said, I love this. I think a few tweaks here and there would make it awesome. I might suggest having the lighting streak beyond the bird's head and maybe play with the eye a bit. It needs more white space I think?But, seriously, I love it!GO T-BIRDS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jlog3000 Posted September 12, 2014 Share Posted September 12, 2014 Cool work on the logos Real1, especially with the wordmark letters. Speaking of which, if you had the complete set of letters and numbers, what would you name that font as? P.S.: Hope to see those on football concept jersey desgins in the future. Florida State Seminoles fan for life (mostly on football, basketball and baseball)! 2011-12 ACC men's basketball conference tournament champions; 2012, 2013 & 2014 ACC football Atlantic Division champions; 2012, 2013 & 2014 ACC football regular season champions; 2012, 2013 & 2014 ACC football conference bowl tournament champions; 2014 NCAA D-I FBS BCS national champions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted September 12, 2014 Share Posted September 12, 2014 I like how the bottom left curve of the neck followed the top curve of the "S" into the "U" on your drawing, but I like how the bird is centered over all three letters in your vector version, so if you could do both of those things I think It might be a little stronger. I also like how the blue/black is a little bit thicker around the eye and beak in your drawing, but overall this is awesome!This. I really liked this. Then maybe bring the two together with a border/outline. The thunderbird head is fantastic though. Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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