jaker52 Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 This is my first hockey concept ever and I tried using ai ( I've always used photoshop) I like it since i can be more creative with striping and stuff.I used an alternate logo since i hate their primary logo. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 I can't fault the execution, especially considering it's your first hockey concept, but I'm not sure the "NP" logo is strong enough to be their primary mark. That being said the striping is certainly an improvement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 I think it would be cool if you had a navy home and a yellow away. I've kinda considered yellow as a viable option for away. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PittsburghRU679 Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 This would make an interesting alternate jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fillmont Posted September 29, 2014 Share Posted September 29, 2014 I feel like the lower fangs/striping on the jersey are too high up. It makes the center feel claustrophobic and unbalanced. Maybe try lowering them a tad? I also think that the NP isn't strong enough to stand on its own. If you're dead against the tiger head, maybe try the guitar pick? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted September 30, 2014 Share Posted September 30, 2014 i'm liking to logo but i also agree that it shouldn't be a primary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted September 30, 2014 Author Share Posted September 30, 2014 I feel like the lower fangs/striping on the jersey are too high up. It makes the center feel claustrophobic and unbalanced. Maybe try lowering them a tad? I also think that the NP isn't strong enough to stand on its own. If you're dead against the tiger head, maybe try the guitar pick?I dont think it would do well but I want to try something MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted September 30, 2014 Author Share Posted September 30, 2014 modified logo idea? MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Legault Posted October 1, 2014 Share Posted October 1, 2014 The logo doesn't scream predator. The current logo is too good not to use as primary. Twitter: @lestoplegault - Email: Christiantlegault@gmail.com Blog: http://legaultdesigns.blogspot.ca/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roadrunner8ball Posted October 1, 2014 Share Posted October 1, 2014 I like the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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