YelichGraphics Posted September 30, 2014 Share Posted September 30, 2014 inspired by their 1942 uniforms this is one of my favorite uniforms to make Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattb6 Posted September 30, 2014 Share Posted September 30, 2014 Why is their a number on top of the wordmark? And the B on the left sleeve is upside. Otherwise it looks pretty good, I love the colors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted September 30, 2014 Share Posted September 30, 2014 A few things:1- Right sleeve shoulder patch is backwards.2- As is, the front of the jersey is too cluttered, with the overlapping and all. I don't think it'd be all that bad if you made it "BOS 1 TON" , could be wrong, I'd have to see it. Even if the text was arched with a couple spaces in the middle for the #, it could work.My one concern doing that would be froy putting the number 46 in there. I think 1 lends itself decently to the design, but start putting in different numbers and IMO, you'd lose it a bit. 3- the pant logo, if it's included, generally goes on the bottom of the pants, right above the knee. Since you're doing a throwback, I don't think the pant logo would add all that much. Really up to you there. 4- You just love different striping patterns on the same uniform, don't you The socks themselves have 2 different striping patterns, neither of which are found in the rest of the set. Especially with a fauxback, you really don't want the striping to be too complex, not the style, but the sheer quantity of different styles.5- #1 on the back is way off-centred.6- Make the name a few sizes larger.Decent start here, I like the direction you're going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsherald Posted September 30, 2014 Share Posted September 30, 2014 3- the pant logo, if it's included, generally goes on the bottom of the pants, right above the knee. Since you're doing a throwback, I don't think the pant logo would add all that much. Really up to you there. Given the way the jersey hangs over the pants, a logo at the top.of the pants wouldn't be seen at all.My own comment: while I am an outspoken advocate of good contrast, if the (important) number on the back stayed black, I would suggest replicating the (less important) gold/yellow number in the front, without any "BOSTON" through or around it, as shown in the model picture. Use the rules of heraldry for more effective sports logos! i.e. keep it simple, use good contrast... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted September 30, 2014 Share Posted September 30, 2014 the front just looks weird with the overlap. and i agree about the number, switch it to yellow with a brown outline. great start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Sean F&F Posted October 1, 2014 Share Posted October 1, 2014 Reminds me of some Fire department shirts that have the number between the words, like thisLooks good, although the shoulder patches are reversed. Swap the left and right. https://fandfsports.wordpress.com/Hockey Uniform Templates (Gimp/Photoshop) http://seanff.deviantart.com/gallery/52790653/Devious-Folder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyny13 Posted October 1, 2014 Share Posted October 1, 2014 looks good! definitely looks much better with consistent striping and the yellow numbers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevsim1 Posted October 1, 2014 Share Posted October 1, 2014 Can we have an example with the number 46? Not sure if a larger number will work or not... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigRed618 Posted October 1, 2014 Share Posted October 1, 2014 I would just use a number. The B on the shoulders could be enough to identify the team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted October 4, 2014 Author Share Posted October 4, 2014 i see your piont Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted October 4, 2014 Share Posted October 4, 2014 Better, but the B's on the sleeves are still upside down. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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