jdp Posted February 14, 2017 Share Posted February 14, 2017 Your second version is so much better. Nothing like a muskrat, if you ask me. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted February 14, 2017 Author Share Posted February 14, 2017 35 minutes ago, jdp said: Your second version is so much better. Nothing like a muskrat, if you ask me. Interesting. My biggest worry before posting it was that it had too much of a beaver/muskrat vibe. So when someone mentioned it I figured that's how most would see it. I'm glad that isn't everyone's first thought though, and that it's being well received. Thanks all for commenting! dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbundy9 Posted February 14, 2017 Share Posted February 14, 2017 The second Preds post is defiantly better than the first. From the rest of the posts it might be just me but the nose or whiskers/cheek area look off to me a little bit.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted February 16, 2017 Author Share Posted February 16, 2017 Are any updates here a significant improvement over the last version? I've been fiddling with it a lot, but I think maybe I got a bit too cute with making the curves line up. If nothing stands out as being better, or if anything stands out as being worse, I think I'll just go back to the last version for the jerseys. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted February 16, 2017 Share Posted February 16, 2017 13 hours ago, chickenfish13 said: Are any updates here a significant improvement over the last version? I've been fiddling with it a lot, but I think maybe I got a bit too cute with making the curves line up. If nothing stands out as being better, or if anything stands out as being worse, I think I'll just go back to the last version for the jerseys. I think that these changes are a downgrade. What you had last worked better . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted February 17, 2017 Share Posted February 17, 2017 7 hours ago, hettinger_rl said: I think that these changes are a downgrade. What you had last worked better . Yeah, I'd have to agree. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted March 2, 2017 Author Share Posted March 2, 2017 Sounds good, I'll revert back to the previous version for the jerseys, which I'm working on right now. Can't get them to where I want them. In the meantime, I've got the next team's logo ready to go. Here's the Kings. It's an edit of an old Lion logo. I'm not sure how the containing shape will be received, obviously it isn't the typical Lion's hair outline. I thought it might be interesting to combine the Lion with a shield, and I'm happy enough with it to stick to it, unless there is any major backlash. Would love to hear thoughts! dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Point1 Posted March 2, 2017 Share Posted March 2, 2017 I really like the mark in general, but I'd like to see some shading or highlights in the black space, OR make the shield a bit smaller/face a bit bigger. A lot of potential here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted March 2, 2017 Share Posted March 2, 2017 I agree with @Point1 , there needs to be something in the black space. Otherwise it looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panthers_2012 Posted March 3, 2017 Share Posted March 3, 2017 On 3/1/2017 at 8:59 PM, chickenfish13 said: Sounds good, I'll revert back to the previous version for the jerseys, which I'm working on right now. Can't get them to where I want them. In the meantime, I've got the next team's logo ready to go. Here's the Kings. It's an edit of an old Lion logo. I'm not sure how the containing shape will be received, obviously it isn't the typical Lion's hair outline. I thought it might be interesting to combine the Lion with a shield, and I'm happy enough with it to stick to it, unless there is any major backlash. Would love to hear thoughts! I would make the face bigger and maybe add the ears to the lion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tanny81 Posted March 3, 2017 Share Posted March 3, 2017 I like the Lion's face and the crown but it's hair could use some silver or white shading. Maybe incorporating the letters LA into it would be cool? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted March 4, 2017 Author Share Posted March 4, 2017 Quick update here dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Point1 Posted March 4, 2017 Share Posted March 4, 2017 Looks awesome. Not sure how this would look but maybe split the silver outline into half silver half white (with white on the outside)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdp Posted March 4, 2017 Share Posted March 4, 2017 Something seems off with the pupils, but I can't pinpoint it. Can't tell whether they should be smaller, absent or more of a crescent. Am I the only one seeing them as slight cross-eyed? I know, sorry, that's not terribly helpful. "Type something, will ya? We're paying for this stuff." - Peter VenkmanComplete: Stateside Soccer Federation | Complete: World Football Club Alliance | Stalled: Roller Hockey International Redux | Stalled: MLB & Soccer Crossover Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeerGuyJordan Posted March 10, 2017 Share Posted March 10, 2017 On 3/3/2017 at 9:38 PM, chickenfish13 said: Quick update here I don't like it for LA, but it would be a magnificent Manchester Monarchs logo. Thunder Bay Lynx - International Hockey Association (2 seasons, 2017-18, 2019-20, 2018 Xtreme Cup Champions) | Houston Armadillos - Major League Hockey (2 seasons, 2016-18) | Minnesota Muskies - North American Basketball Association (1 season, 2017-2018) | Louisville Thoroughbreds - United League of Baseball (1 season, 2017, 2017 United Cup Champions) | Las Vegas Thunderbirds - International Basketball League (1 season, 2016-17, 2017 Champions) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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