gusbus00 Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 So I decided to re-brand my school logo because currently all they have is a clip art picture and a crappy horseshoe logo. They used to use the broncos logo with different colors, but they were afraid of having a lawsuit. This is my first logo from scratch so bear with me. I can't really get the angle right so I will show what the picture it is based on.Oh, by the way are mascot is the colts. "You play to win the game...Hello. You play to win the game." - Herman Edwards"We talkin' bout practice?" - A.I."What’s that? Ah — playoffs? Don’t talk about — playoffs? You kidding me? Playoffs? I just hope we can win a game! Another game." - Jim Mora Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
__taylorc Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 I feel like there needs to be a bit more detail in the head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordyhazy Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 Maybe add a pupil on its eye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mod Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 did you go to high school at chartiers valley lol 2014 HIGHLAND CREEK FANTASY FOOTBALL 3rd PLACE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gusbus00 Posted January 19, 2015 Author Share Posted January 19, 2015 Thank you for all of the feed back. I will bring it into consideration when making an updated version. "You play to win the game...Hello. You play to win the game." - Herman Edwards"We talkin' bout practice?" - A.I."What’s that? Ah — playoffs? Don’t talk about — playoffs? You kidding me? Playoffs? I just hope we can win a game! Another game." - Jim Mora Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gusbus00 Posted January 19, 2015 Author Share Posted January 19, 2015 I created two different versions one with a tweaked original mouth, and the other with a completely new mouth. I made some parts lighter to give the logo more depth and made the mane more flowy. Also changed the eye. I tried putting a pupil in but it didn't look right. "You play to win the game...Hello. You play to win the game." - Herman Edwards"We talkin' bout practice?" - A.I."What’s that? Ah — playoffs? Don’t talk about — playoffs? You kidding me? Playoffs? I just hope we can win a game! Another game." - Jim Mora Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thecargeek Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 I created two different versions one with a tweaked original mouth, and the other with a completely new mouth. I made some parts lighter to give the logo more depth and made the mane more flowy. Also changed the eye. I tried putting a pupil in but it didn't look right.I like the older/first mouth, because the new one is a bit too small. Honestly I think you got the perspective right, and it looks menacing and great, but the ears look, still, a little bit weird. They are too long and sharp. Maybe decrease the length and increase the with and bulge, also make the other end of the ear show more, I really can't see that variation of colour.Either way, you got a solid and great logo going, and it looks spectacular. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan24898 Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 Definite improvement, IMO both mouth styles look good, not really sure which one is my favorite. I still think the definition lines could use some work, and I second Thecargeek's thoughts about the ear. Star championship signature credit to packerfan21396 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gusbus00 Posted January 19, 2015 Author Share Posted January 19, 2015 I have fixed the ear. "You play to win the game...Hello. You play to win the game." - Herman Edwards"We talkin' bout practice?" - A.I."What’s that? Ah — playoffs? Don’t talk about — playoffs? You kidding me? Playoffs? I just hope we can win a game! Another game." - Jim Mora Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thecargeek Posted January 19, 2015 Share Posted January 19, 2015 I have fixed the ear.Perfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gusbus00 Posted January 19, 2015 Author Share Posted January 19, 2015 I plan on making a wordmark, what font do you think I should use? "You play to win the game...Hello. You play to win the game." - Herman Edwards"We talkin' bout practice?" - A.I."What’s that? Ah — playoffs? Don’t talk about — playoffs? You kidding me? Playoffs? I just hope we can win a game! Another game." - Jim Mora Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordyhazy Posted January 20, 2015 Share Posted January 20, 2015 Like I Said put in a pupil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gusbus00 Posted January 24, 2015 Author Share Posted January 24, 2015 Update!!!! "You play to win the game...Hello. You play to win the game." - Herman Edwards"We talkin' bout practice?" - A.I."What’s that? Ah — playoffs? Don’t talk about — playoffs? You kidding me? Playoffs? I just hope we can win a game! Another game." - Jim Mora Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gusbus00 Posted January 24, 2015 Author Share Posted January 24, 2015 Thank you a ton for the advice. I just saw that post you made on that thread. "You play to win the game...Hello. You play to win the game." - Herman Edwards"We talkin' bout practice?" - A.I."What’s that? Ah — playoffs? Don’t talk about — playoffs? You kidding me? Playoffs? I just hope we can win a game! Another game." - Jim Mora Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gusbus00 Posted January 24, 2015 Author Share Posted January 24, 2015 What do you think of this. It is getting somewhere, but the snout is a little cartooney. "You play to win the game...Hello. You play to win the game." - Herman Edwards"We talkin' bout practice?" - A.I."What’s that? Ah — playoffs? Don’t talk about — playoffs? You kidding me? Playoffs? I just hope we can win a game! Another game." - Jim Mora Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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