suplauren Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 I like it more with the shading, it gives it some nice personality. I think on black it probably needs a white outline. Nice work. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasleyK Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 I don't like how the left tooth overhangs the bottom lip but the right tooth does not. maybe add some small accent marks to the spikes like you have on the teeth as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 I see now that the odd shape was a combination of the spike on the collar and the outline of the words. I like how you got rid of the collar spike I'm your last update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 HE needs nostrils. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 1, 2015 Author Share Posted February 1, 2015 HE needs nostrils.I'm in nostril denial... couldn't figure out how to make them work the way I wanted, so I just left it a black nose Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 i love it nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 3, 2015 Author Share Posted February 3, 2015 Interesting, I was reading through the College Re-branding thread, and how many of them don't respond, or just blow you off. While I was commissioned to do this Bulldog, I get sporadic responses from the school, yet I send it to TCU AD Chris Del Conte (we have a friendly relationship) and he responds 9 hours later on a Sunday morning! Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 4, 2015 Author Share Posted February 4, 2015 OK think this is the final with anatomically correct nose... ok so its just a nose. Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted February 4, 2015 Share Posted February 4, 2015 One small thing that is bugging the crap out of me is the fact that his right tooth (on our left) is in front of the bottom lip, when it should actually go behind it. Other than that, this is one fine logo. The amount of progress in which you've made is equally amazing. Well done! @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 4, 2015 Author Share Posted February 4, 2015 OK so just got a response from the school... it is too cartoonish? Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted February 4, 2015 Share Posted February 4, 2015 OK so just got a response from the school... it is too cartoonish?what i would do is just add more details, in wrinkels, fur marks, any thing to make the dog more realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted February 4, 2015 Share Posted February 4, 2015 One small thing that is bugging the crap out of me is the fact that his right tooth (on our left) is in front of the bottom lip, when it should actually go behind it.Yep, I was just coming in to post this myself. That needs to be corrected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted February 4, 2015 Share Posted February 4, 2015 OK so just got a response from the school... it is too cartoonish?The eyes are a little cartoony. Maybe if you made the pupil and iris bigger. laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 4, 2015 Author Share Posted February 4, 2015 Better? Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seangilman Posted February 4, 2015 Share Posted February 4, 2015 That shading on the right side looks pretty badass imo. The grey one looks best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 5, 2015 Author Share Posted February 5, 2015 Ok went with the shadowed face, but the highlights were a little rough, so I cleaned them up a bit and bade the lines a little more consistent. Now to get them to sign off... Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted February 5, 2015 Share Posted February 5, 2015 Make the shadow a darker gray instead of black. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsaline97 Posted February 5, 2015 Share Posted February 5, 2015 The one thing that's bothering me is the spike behind his right ear (our left). It throws me off especially because, on the black and white version, it's the same color as the ear. Imo, it's not really necessary, but it's your call. You've made excellent progress on this logo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted February 5, 2015 Share Posted February 5, 2015 I disagree about the shadow. I think it brings the entire look down from an A to about a C+. Remove the shadow and it's golden. @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 5, 2015 Author Share Posted February 5, 2015 I disagree about the shadow. I think it brings the entire look down from an A to about a C+. Remove the shadow and it's golden.I dont understand their "its cartoonish" issue. Have they looked at Fresno State, Georgia, Gonzage, et all... those are no more or less cartoonish. Its a caricature.I prefer it with no shadow, but the customer has opinions.With cycling apparel I have a great example of one I did that was really cool, until the customer kept piling crap on it and its horrendous. I kept one, just so I could show customers what happens when they don't listen to the person they are paying. Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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