Thecargeek Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 and reworked the teethYAH, that's more like it, looks amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e_gossage Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 OK this is minus the PASCO and less shading on the body. It's looking good Wally.Make the lines on the teeth as "strong" as the rest of the lines.The top of the black nose could use a grey highlight to make it stand out a bit and separate it from the black of the eyes.I agree. Put a highlight on the nose and let's see how that looks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 ok and with PASCO on the Helmet Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biscuit faces of them Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 Awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 ok fixed the nose... thanks for all the feedback!, Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 Ok kind of love this on a white helmet. Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e_gossage Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 ok fixed the nose... thanks for all the feedback!, I think you might have a winner!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 Right now the left tooth is curving outwards. I think it would look better/more natural if it were turned inwards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 Right now the left tooth is curving outwards. I think it would look better/more natural if it were turned inwards.. like this? Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 and Back to a P with the bulldog in the center Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e_gossage Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 Right now the left tooth is curving outwards. I think it would look better/more natural if it were turned inwards.. like this?Now I think you might have a winner! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted January 31, 2015 Share Posted January 31, 2015 Right now the left tooth is curving outwards. I think it would look better/more natural if it were turned inwards.. like this?Yes, like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolphins91 Posted January 31, 2015 Share Posted January 31, 2015 Amazing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 I'm not really digging the gradients. Also, you should make the highlight on the nose a little wider, it's awkwardly small right now and would disappear if the logo gets shrunk down, which it eventually will. But awesome job making a unique bulldog, it's very difficult to do! laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 1, 2015 Author Share Posted February 1, 2015 I'm not really digging the gradients. Also, you should make the highlight on the nose a little wider, it's awkwardly small right now and would disappear if the logo gets shrunk down, which it eventually will. But awesome job making a unique bulldog, it's very difficult to do!Thanks, it took me a few weeks to figure out how to do that.So the gradient represents a chrome background on the helmet decal... it will normally be white and gray.I should have clarified... here it is in spot colors Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 The shading on the back ear looks a little awkward. I'd say you should probably just nix it. Other than that it's basically spot-on. Great work! laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 What is going on behind his left ear (our right)? Is it part of the collar? I think it should probably be removed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 1, 2015 Author Share Posted February 1, 2015 OK, removed shading on ear, and the spike from the collar under said ear... Here is the Logo with both Purple and White as the primary colors on the Nameand again thanks for all the responses. Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 I actually wasn't talking about that collar spike, although I think it looks better with that spike removed. I was talking about the shape behind the dog's ear, between the bottom of the S and the C. You have gray shading on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted February 1, 2015 Author Share Posted February 1, 2015 I actually wasn't talking about that collar spike, although I think it looks better with that spike removed. I was talking about the shape behind the dog's ear, between the bottom of the S and the C. You have gray shading on it.I keep going back and forth on the spikes... so here is just the dog, and the shading was the chrome. The bottom two have no shading and will work in black and white. Or on a black shirt... Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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