JMurr Posted January 31, 2015 Share Posted January 31, 2015 Which is better with or without the palm tree. Also and C&C to improve is much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted January 31, 2015 Share Posted January 31, 2015 I like the second option bt if you found a way to make the Palm Tree seem less clustered it might work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted January 31, 2015 Share Posted January 31, 2015 maybe make the palm tree into a "C". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted January 31, 2015 Share Posted January 31, 2015 It's better without the palm tree; that just clutters things up. But there are other problems. The script font you chose for "alifornia" is too thin and wispy both to stand out against the ball in the background and to really go with the big, thick "C" font. And it may just be because of the C, but the basketball looks like it's misshapen, a bit oval. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reebokNFL Posted January 31, 2015 Share Posted January 31, 2015 I don't see what you're trying to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JMurr Posted January 31, 2015 Author Share Posted January 31, 2015 Now that you say that I think that the oval effect is because I have the sun bursts around the ball coming in to tight near the C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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