Sharpir0 Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 Hi AllHave been working on a Caracan (cat) log for the last couple of days. Think its mostly there part from the wordmark but having issues getting the hair on the ear correct. Having looked at it for a while I think it needs a fresh pair of eyes. Any c&c's you may have about the logo or resolving the ear would be really useful. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 The logo is great, but I think you have too many colors. I would either choose the peach color or the white. Also, do you mean a caracal? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 Looks awesome! A little out of my league so I won't be much help. I was wondering though, the faded look on the ear and the left side of the neck, is that meant to be a watermark? GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharpir0 Posted February 8, 2015 Author Share Posted February 8, 2015 Thanks for the comment. Oops yeah i did mean Caracal. Sorry didn't relise i'd made the typo(s) in my haste. Here's version with wordmark (a in progress) and correct spelling! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharpir0 Posted February 8, 2015 Author Share Posted February 8, 2015 Hi Chuck thanks for your comment. Yeah i've faded it, added noise and spot lighted the colour slightly as a watermark of sorts. Think I remember there being people talking about vultures stealing work from the site so can never be to careful. Such a shame when its such a great site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsherald Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 I think the hair on the ear works well enough (may need to be slightly longer and swept back more), but I agree the eye needs work. Even a small white mark in the blue, to indicate that it can see, would help. When working with a natural subject like this, reference to a photo is invaluable.By the way, excellent work! You are 95%+ the way there!. Use the rules of heraldry for more effective sports logos! i.e. keep it simple, use good contrast... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 Hi Chuck thanks for your comment. Yeah i've faded it, added noise and spot lighted the colour slightly as a watermark of sorts. Think I remember there being people talking about vultures stealing work from the site so can never be to careful. Such a shame when its such a great site. Absolutely, you're smart to do that. I don't cause I use paint so no real use for my work. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TVIXX Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 It's so beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martymcfry Posted February 8, 2015 Share Posted February 8, 2015 I love this. Is the top part that looks gray supposed to be another color or a blur? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTKing Posted February 9, 2015 Share Posted February 9, 2015 Man this is an awesome logo. I think the ear looks great, the eye needs a little something more but I'm not quite sure what. Great job so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharpir0 Posted February 9, 2015 Author Share Posted February 9, 2015 Thanks guys for the feedback and tips. Will take a look at making some of the suggested amends this week and have a revised version up later in the week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharpir0 Posted February 10, 2015 Author Share Posted February 10, 2015 Here's my latest update that have included some of your suggested updates. Quite a few changes have been made though some may look relatively minor. I've uploaded a version with and without and eye (either way eye has been modded, thanks Sportsherald for the reference). Not sure if it makes it all a bit busy. My thought throughout has been to use as simple as possible geometry but who knows! Again any C&C's are welcome and also apologies for the watermarks if they impede the view to much!Thanks again for your help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan24898 Posted February 10, 2015 Share Posted February 10, 2015 Is the eye light blue, or white with a blur? Either way, I think that version is much better. Star championship signature credit to packerfan21396 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTKing Posted February 12, 2015 Share Posted February 12, 2015 Totally nailed it with the eye. Fantastic logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted February 12, 2015 Share Posted February 12, 2015 You absolutely NAILED that logo judging by your picture reference. Its clean visible and the colored eye looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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