ECUFan25 Posted April 16, 2015 Share Posted April 16, 2015 Hey everyone! This is my 2nd stab at a baseball redesign project. Hopefully this one will be better recieved .The first team in this series is the Iowa Hawkeyes. Without farther ado here it is! P.S. sorry it's sideways! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted April 16, 2015 Share Posted April 16, 2015 First, these are quite sloppy. I recommend tracing a template or just printing multiple templates to work on. I recommend definitely taking more time, since the logos are sloppy and hats are small, etc. Anyways, to the design, I understand what you're trying to do, but it just isn't working. The color sleeves look quite awkward, especially on the away. I would change the Away's sleeves to black, and bring them up onto the top of the shoulders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted April 17, 2015 Share Posted April 17, 2015 This is the same thing as your last concept, like I said last time, print of a template and take your time. The hat is too small and the script is hard to read, before you post a concept, look at it and say, is this the absolute best it can be. Use the comments to help improve your concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyGuy5 Posted April 17, 2015 Share Posted April 17, 2015 Pretty sloppy. I would agree with what everybody else has said so far. Plus, it's the Hawkeyes, ugh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ECUFan25 Posted April 17, 2015 Author Share Posted April 17, 2015 Sneak Peek on an update for Iowa.Put it on a better traced template (will use this one from now on unless it gets too sloppy)changed home pants from gray to black.Aligned 'Iowa' text.I'll do your cyclones next CyGuy5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyGuy5 Posted April 17, 2015 Share Posted April 17, 2015 This one does look a little better, but it is still sort of sloppy. If you would like my template for hand drawin uniforms I can scan it for you and send it to you via DM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ECUFan25 Posted April 17, 2015 Author Share Posted April 17, 2015 This one does look a little better, but it is still sort of sloppy. If you would like my template for hand drawin uniforms I can scan it for you and send it to you via DMCould you PM it on here? I can't have a twitter account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ECUFan25 Posted April 19, 2015 Author Share Posted April 19, 2015 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted April 19, 2015 Share Posted April 19, 2015 ECUFan aid I could, so I did. I tried to capture his ideas, but digitally.(yes, this was just a quick scetch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ECUFan25 Posted April 20, 2015 Author Share Posted April 20, 2015 Purdue is coming, I think you'll like it. Modern and classic at the same time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 I'm sorry, but black pants just don't look good. I'd recommend that you work on your presentation before you do too many more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ECUFan25 Posted April 30, 2015 Author Share Posted April 30, 2015 with my 100th post coming you can expect a surprise with it. I hope you like itEDIT: will have to wait, paint isn't working hint hint Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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