YelichGraphics Posted April 25, 2015 Share Posted April 25, 2015 Contest for school logo ends on Monday, but i need to get this to my freind who goes there tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted April 25, 2015 Share Posted April 25, 2015 It's very realistic to a bird, like the eye and everything. I would try to make it more look like an actual logo for a sport. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted April 25, 2015 Author Share Posted April 25, 2015 Head Shot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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DTConcepts Posted April 25, 2015 Share Posted April 25, 2015 Maybe you should add a roundel or something, to make it more logo-like, as PaperThin said. "You ain't gonna learn what you don't wanna know..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FGWB Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 Lancaster, as in new team name submissions? Cheektowaga kid here.But it's too literal. Focus on using the "head shot" you posted, like most teams with bird logos. Also, I would prefer a more active expression on the hawk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 Add Shadows in a dark red, and simplify and/or sharpen the lines of the bird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 it's currently more of an illustration than a logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted April 26, 2015 Author Share Posted April 26, 2015 Lancaster, as in new team name submissions? Cheektowaga kid here.But it's too literal. Focus on using the "head shot" you posted, like most teams with bird logos. Also, I would prefer a more active expression on the hawk.Depew kid, which is ironic. But i used to go to Lancaster and im doing it for a freind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted April 26, 2015 Author Share Posted April 26, 2015 Update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CallMeT22 Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 You have a lot of lines. Take the outline off of the bottom of the eye and the meeting point of the beak and the rest of the head. Thin lines are bad for sports logos. Sports logos are supposed to be bold. That means think outlines or no outlines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted April 26, 2015 Author Share Posted April 26, 2015 best comment ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FGWB Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 Also, I feel like the bottom is way too busy. Simplify the amount of "swooshes", for lack of a better term. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 Also, while the bump on the beak might be realistic, one curved line would work better for a logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 Good on adding the shine, but make it more jagged and feather-like instead of smooth. Your on your way to having a good logo, and like the others have said, take out the thin outlines and simplify the head in general. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 I think your just a few tweaks away from a winner. The element that needs the most work are the talons. The stroke is a little too thin and the curves could be refined a touch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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8993 Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 The most recent update is a bit of a downgrade, in my opinion. The smooth bottom over the feathered bottom was a step back, as your second update was pretty good.I think just the head as the logo is a bit bland, for my taste. Make it a bird of prey, not just a bird on a perch. Incorporate the fierceness of the wings or something. I would aim for something in this general area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted April 26, 2015 Share Posted April 26, 2015 ^agreed.make the outside outline thicker and more jagged. Maybe add some sort of highlight on the beak as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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