Vicious Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 Hello again, Ive been toying around with this logo in my spare time, and would love to hear your thoughts. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philly's Phinest Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 In all honesty, I think this is great. I think it's an amazing modernization of their old logo. I feel like the font could be changed to something else to match the logo a little more. That's really my only complaint. Beautiful work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 I'm really liking this combination of eras. Great work. The only problem I have with it is that the thickness of the silver lines appears to be inconsistent. It seems to be much thicker around the feet than it is around the head and tail. This would look pretty cool on a helmet. @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 Very, very, very, very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 As a very big lions fan, I would love to see this as a logo. However, The Black to me is something that has bugged me since I started following football.Other than that, I can truly say that this is one of the best Lions concepts I've seen. If you are doing helmets and uniforms, would love to see those as well. I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RockyTopper Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 Nice modernization of a classic logo, and great job combining the current lion with it. I've always liked the prowling lion with the two stripes behind it more than the leaping lion logo (even though the 2009 update was one of the best logo fixes in recent sports memory in my opinion). It just has the feeling of a team that has been around as long as the Lions. Have you tried outlining the script in some way? It looks pretty good and fits with the imagery of the logo, but it just looks like it's lacking and needs something to help better define it. That's really my only complaint. Wonderful job on this! ☦ICXC NIKA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicious Posted May 8, 2015 Author Share Posted May 8, 2015 Thanks a ton everyone. I do agree with the inconsistent stroke widths, I will focus on that in the next round. As for the black, I'm not a huge fan of it either, it was kind of a last second addition. Here is a version with just blue and silver: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FFWally Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 Ill echo the comments above, great modernization. For a helmet, it needs to be aggressive...This is a submissive pose, almost backing up. I know it is ready to pounce, but the first look is its leaning away from the fight.That said, I love where you are going with this. Fictional History of the SFAF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suplauren Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 Overall, this is a cool concept. A lot of areas need work as far as lion anatomy goes, but it's a good start. I think the biggest fixes it needs first are:1) I'd love to see the mane bigger. It looks a little small and sickly right now, whereas the current primary looks large and intimidating2) the face proportions seem off. I think the eye may be too far up3) your line weight consistency needs work, mainly around its stomach and back leg. The shadowing there looks a little clunky.Looking forward to seeing this one progress! laurenlogos.tumblr.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TVIXX Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 just have a consistant line weight like everyone else said and it's money Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted May 8, 2015 Share Posted May 8, 2015 Very nice logo. I think we could better appreciate it without the background (which looks great btw, just want to see the logo on white). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GDLions Posted May 9, 2015 Share Posted May 9, 2015 This is a really good start!!! My only other complaint (aside from whats already been said by suplauren) is the feet. The rest of the logo has a lot of curves and movement, but the feet seem blocky, all most like hockey sticks. Try adding some more detail to them and making them a bit more realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nathan8848 Posted May 9, 2015 Share Posted May 9, 2015 This is SICK!! Row The Boat!! RoWINg!! R.T.B!! YELLOW!! JACKETS!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christian Legault Posted May 9, 2015 Share Posted May 9, 2015 What if you made the back legs entirely grey. Other than that, I like Twitter: @lestoplegault - Email: Christiantlegault@gmail.com Blog: http://legaultdesigns.blogspot.ca/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted May 9, 2015 Share Posted May 9, 2015 Ill echo the comments above, great modernization. For a helmet, it needs to be aggressive...This is a submissive pose, almost backing up. I know it is ready to pounce, but the first look is its leaning away from the fight.That said, I love where you are going with this. I agree with the others in that this is very good, but I do agree with FFWally, the pose does look like he is backing up. If you can make him look more aggressive, it would really improve the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Cleveland Fan Posted May 10, 2015 Share Posted May 10, 2015 Ill echo the comments above, great modernization. For a helmet, it needs to be aggressive...This is a submissive pose, almost backing up. I know it is ready to pounce, but the first look is its leaning away from the fight.That said, I love where you are going with this. I agree with the others in that this is very good, but I do agree with FFWally, the pose does look like he is backing up. If you can make him look more aggressive, it would really improve the logo.^^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted May 10, 2015 Share Posted May 10, 2015 you should have a head logo, for like the helmet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForwardProgress Posted May 10, 2015 Share Posted May 10, 2015 Looks too friendly and cartoony. Kinda looks like something you'd see in a children's book, and I don't think a rough and tough football team would want that kind of image.Also putting the photo of the buildings in the background makes it hard to see where the black outline around the lion starts and stops. If you could post an image of your concept with a plain white background I'd appreciate it because then I'd be able to see the entire shape without it blending into the background in certain spots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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