YelichGraphics Posted May 29, 2015 Share Posted May 29, 2015 I know that this would be the 3rd or 4th on up and running on the boards but, i was i bored in health class today and as always i was drawing. i came up with a pretty cool avalanche logo i thought i would like to show you guys. Then in health class i began drawing around the logo and created a jersey. this was realtivly simple because well, the logo is simple and the jersey was basically already done from the last time i did the avalanche. i hope you enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DTConcepts Posted May 29, 2015 Share Posted May 29, 2015 Not a huge fan of the logo. I liked that the Avs never really had a smooth logo, it always seemed kinda rugged, plus, your logo has too much white space, and doesn't incorporate an avalanche at all. The jersey stripes look good, but I'd make them look like more defined mountains, rather than ocean waves. "You ain't gonna learn what you don't wanna know..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted May 29, 2015 Author Share Posted May 29, 2015 Ok UpdatesNot a huge fan of the logo. I liked that the Avs never really had a smooth logo, it always seemed kinda rugged, plus, your logo has too much white space, and doesn't incorporate an avalanche at all. The jersey stripes look good, but I'd make them look like more defined mountains, rather than ocean waves.i feel like if i follow all of this advice here, its going to just end up like yours. not trying to say yours is bad, its great. i want mine to stand out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DTConcepts Posted May 30, 2015 Share Posted May 30, 2015 The logo still seems very abstract. I'm okay with the jersey, but as Kaz said...Too fluid. I know they are the Avalanche and not the Mountains, but mountains are rigid-looking things.That said, I wonder what it would look like with the current logo? "You ain't gonna learn what you don't wanna know..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerrylawless3 Posted May 30, 2015 Share Posted May 30, 2015 The mountain top on the bottom of the jersey should be flipped on the rear view. Peak is on the player's left hand side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supernova Concepts Posted May 30, 2015 Share Posted May 30, 2015 Try adding the first logos "A" to the second logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted May 30, 2015 Author Share Posted May 30, 2015 Try adding the first logos "A" to the second logothats exatly what im doing right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted May 30, 2015 Author Share Posted May 30, 2015 OK mixed logosorry pixels keep on doing this to me um im not going to fix it this time. just pretend its not therewhen the next update comes ill fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DTConcepts Posted May 30, 2015 Share Posted May 30, 2015 Better. The grey avalanche looks like slush you'd see on the side of a street after a snowstorm. I suggest making it white. The mountains on the jersey still seem to fluid, if you ask me. "You ain't gonna learn what you don't wanna know..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted May 30, 2015 Share Posted May 30, 2015 The Jersey itself is good. make the actual avalanche a bit more blocky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supernova Concepts Posted May 30, 2015 Share Posted May 30, 2015 The A looks better, but I find that the avalanche is a little to smooth and consistent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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OhioSportsMan61 Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 I like the jersey itself a lot, but the logo needs a lot of work. There is too much going on in there and kinda looks like a mess. I get that it is supposed to look like an actual avalanche, but it's too busy. My Behance Portfolio --- Follow @Steinosaur19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TylerG Posted June 4, 2015 Share Posted June 4, 2015 Make the collar insert red/maroon/brick/whatever. The black is a bit annoying considering it's nowhere else on the uniforms. Other than that, I agree with everyone else. Logo is odd, a bit too abstract, I would go back to the drawing board on that but the jerseys are solid. NHL Uniform Matchup Database --- TylerG's NHL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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