jshmiami96 Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 The Orlando Magic have an incredibly stale uniform design where they've attempted to combine the past pinstriped 1990's look with a bold and modern font. It's a combination that just doesn't work. There is an insistence it seems by the team to keep that basketball with the trail as part of its identity. I attempted to clean up that element a bit and combine it in a new, perhaps more lasting way. All C&C is welcome and I'll update on any improvements worth pursuing. It's not great by any means but it's a start. Thanks guys. St. Joseph of Arimathea, Pray for Us"Now when the centurion, and they that were with him, watching Jesus, saw the earthquake, and those things that were done, they feared greatly, saying, Truly this was the Son of God." Mt 27:54 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ramsjetsthunder Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 It seems kind of messy to me. Try to clean up and simplify the lines, making them more organic and less geometric. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 some cleaning up could legit make that BEAUTIFUL. A new font too? MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philly's Phinest Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 I like where this is headed. This is a good start, however, I do agree with both comments that some cleanup of lines is needed first. The word Magic in the blue looks a little forced right now. I'm trying to think of how you can fix this, but at the moment I can't really give you a good suggestion. I'm thinking maybe align it to the right. Looking forward to see what this becomes though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FGWB Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 Whenever I see Desdemona used for anything, my mind immediately goes to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 Not bad looks like an icesickle. ..but in. Good way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvanBirchfield Posted June 2, 2015 Share Posted June 2, 2015 Nice concept but I think it's too busy, I like their current logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jshmiami96 Posted June 2, 2015 Author Share Posted June 2, 2015 Took your guys' advice and cleaned up the basketball trail thing and changed the font. A simple blur cleaned up some of the jaggedness. St. Joseph of Arimathea, Pray for Us"Now when the centurion, and they that were with him, watching Jesus, saw the earthquake, and those things that were done, they feared greatly, saying, Truly this was the Son of God." Mt 27:54 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadojoker Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 Much better..the negative space creates a nice classic illusion!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted June 6, 2015 Share Posted June 6, 2015 Yeah this is definitely headed in a good direction. The lines on the ball are uneven but that kinda adds to it in a good way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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