Wgeddes122 Posted June 12, 2015 Author Share Posted June 12, 2015 Your concepts have come on leaps and bounds over the past few weeks. It's great to see you reacting positively to some good C&C.Some nice ideas for Bayern. I just think the designs are competing with the sponsor logo rather than complimenting it. They are good designs and the sponsor logo is probably about the right size. You might want to move the sponsor lower on the away kit and maybe on the third increase the gap between the top and bottom sections of the red and blue lines so that the sponsor logo is in a space of its own. Most sponsors would want their logo to be clearly visible and perhaps this might help.thanks, I will look at adjusting the t mobile logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 12, 2015 Author Share Posted June 12, 2015 Update of Bayern, tried moving the t-mobile logo down on the away kit and gave it more space on the third kit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 12, 2015 Author Share Posted June 12, 2015 Borussia MochengladbachI went with non- traditional looksHome kit- all black kit with white hoopsAway kit- all green kit with dark green diamond patternThird kit- all grey kit with black and green criss cross diamond around the patch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky Top Posted June 12, 2015 Share Posted June 12, 2015 Bayern is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 13, 2015 Author Share Posted June 13, 2015 Borussia Dortmunda more traditional lookHome kit- yellow top with black stripes and sleeves, black shorts and yellow socksAway kit- black top with thin yellow stripes, yellow shorts and black socksThird kit- all grey kit with black and yellow cross centered on the logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kerlonmoura Posted June 13, 2015 Share Posted June 13, 2015 Some nice kits here! I would recommend you to use a lighter shade of black, so that the stitching details are more visible.For the Bayern kits, I think that the Bayern logo should be smaller, and it would be better if you added the stars on top of the logos for both Bayern and Dortmund.Keep it up, can't wait to see more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 14, 2015 Author Share Posted June 14, 2015 SV Darmstadt 98one of the newly promoted teams to the bundesligaHome kit- blue top with white sleeves and wide white chevron with white thin chevron gradient above itAway kit- white top with grey hoops and blue shorts and socksThird kit- two tone orange kit with fleur di lis pattern Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 15, 2015 Author Share Posted June 15, 2015 FC KolnHome kit- red with white sleeves and horns cutting in to the red, white shorts, and red socksAway kit- white with red sash, red shorts and white socksThird kit- all black kit with sublimated goat design Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 16, 2015 Author Share Posted June 16, 2015 LA GalaxyHome kit- all white with yellow striped gradientAway kit- similar to this years. all dark blue kit with lighter blue stripesThird kit- LA flag inspired kit, all black with vertical three color sash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 17, 2015 Author Share Posted June 17, 2015 It would be great to get C&C and feedback, I've posted three straight teams and no comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted June 17, 2015 Share Posted June 17, 2015 For the Galaxy, I would suggest not going away from the diagonal sash on the home kit, as they seem to really be establishing that as their identity in recent years. Maybe you could incorporate your gradient design into a sash? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 18, 2015 Author Share Posted June 18, 2015 For the Galaxy, I would suggest not going away from the diagonal sash on the home kit, as they seem to really be establishing that as their identity in recent years. Maybe you could incorporate your gradient design into a sash?ok, i'll look into doing that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 I don't like the recoloring of the crest on the third. maybe do it in just white? MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 19, 2015 Author Share Posted June 19, 2015 Here is an update of LAHome kit- now a yellow stripe gradient sashThird kit- logo is now black white and grey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
upperV03 Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 Your Galaxy home kit is much improved now, and I think the yellow sash serves the kit very well, in addition to distinguishing the kit from the past couple Galaxy home kits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 19, 2015 Author Share Posted June 19, 2015 Your Galaxy home kit is much improved now, and I think the yellow sash serves the kit very well, in addition to distinguishing the kit from the past couple Galaxy home kits.thanks, and thanks for the idea, it really works well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Howie_16 Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 I'm looking forward to seeing what you do for Hamburg! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 19, 2015 Author Share Posted June 19, 2015 LAFC.Home kit- red top with green and brown vertical stripe down the middle, white shorts and red socksAway kit- all brown kit with stripe across the chest diagonally divided in half green half red, accents on one side are all green and all red on the other sideThird kit- white top with red sleeves and three color stripe across the chest, red shorts and white socks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenD Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 Big fan of the crest and Disney as the sponsor but would've preferred brown on the primary since it's such a unique color to mls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wgeddes122 Posted June 19, 2015 Author Share Posted June 19, 2015 The red is the teams main color so that's why it's the home color Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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