Dexter Morgan Posted July 3, 2015 Share Posted July 3, 2015 Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportzfan Posted July 3, 2015 Share Posted July 3, 2015 the shading in the face looks weird especially around the bridge of the nose. Id get rid of that, it also kind of looks like he has a huge double chin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cosmic Posted July 4, 2015 Share Posted July 4, 2015 What is the 1798 lined up with? I feel like it should be parallel to the bottom of the page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heycurly Posted July 7, 2015 Share Posted July 7, 2015 It looks as though the 1798 is aligned to the person. Both would need to be rotated a few degrees up; it's fine if he's looking slightly upward.Some things to try:-try the 1798 below the person.-try 17 on one side of him, the 98 on the other.-leave the 1798 as is, and put "Est." or "ESTD" on the left side. None of these are necessarily better, just different ways of approaching the same problem.BTW: Love the color pallet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dexter Morgan Posted July 7, 2015 Author Share Posted July 7, 2015 Thanks for the suggestions guys, though it's a little late to make any changes. I actually posted the wrong logo, the date was removed. For the record, 1798 isn't an establishment date. It's year Wolfe Tone died. Establishment date is actually 2015. Only been open a few months. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2001mark Posted July 8, 2015 Share Posted July 8, 2015 I like it. It looks nice juxtaposed with this white background. I'm not certain how much pop it'd have mounted on a dark wall &/or building. @2001mark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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