jaker52 Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 Well my NYSL series was losing creativity and getting lazy toward the end so over the past week I have been doing this. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 Nice.I love the color scheme, but I don't like the top of the crest. It looks kind of empty and flat, and the font (Vanilla Whale), isn't one for an MLS team. TBH, The uniforms are complete gold. don't change that, but change the crest. I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted July 17, 2015 Author Share Posted July 17, 2015 I fixed the images, so Now yall can see these betterNice.I love the color scheme, but I don't like the top of the crest. It looks kind of empty and flat, and the font (Vanilla Whale), isn't one for an MLS team. TBH, The uniforms are complete gold. don't change that, but change the crest.I was wondering about the font and wasn't sure, but I thought it would just be more unique. I may change it. As far as the top, I'm not sure if the small pic made it look weird but that is fixed. I will still see what I can do about that. MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S.Tom.P Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 I agree that the top portion of the crest feels a bit empty with the text not filling up enough space. Other than that, this is terrific. And strangely timely for me since I just returned from visiting Nashville. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seattle1917 Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 Great work. Love the color scheme  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JTswag187 Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 I would change the font. Seems to pirate like for this concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wquarton Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 Font is actually my favourite part. I think the top feels a bit empty though. Perhaps you could move the city skyline up slightly to fill in the space and move the words together slightly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 I would place Music City on one line and draw it as an arc above the large building on the right centered with more detail and the Grand Ole Opry inside that building to tie the whole name together. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBearNYC Posted July 17, 2015 Share Posted July 17, 2015 Almost perfect. I'd name it "Nashville city." If you really want "Music city," then please get rid of the "Nashville Tennessee," it's too much. Great concept work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mamiller99 Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 This may be a dumb idea, but what if you were to make the background have 5 pinstripes, so that it resembles other badges. Also, you could say that it was guitar strings.just an idea to make the space look less empty. That's what- She Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New York's Greatest Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 Almost perfect. I'd name it "Nashville city." If you really want "Music city," then please get rid of the "Nashville Tennessee," it's too much. Great concept work.Please don't name it Nashville City their are enough MLS teams with city in the name. NYCFC and OCSC (Orlando City who shouldn't be called city) http://i.imgur.com/Yz8Jexr.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New York's Greatest Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 Well my NYSL series was losing creativity and getting lazy toward the end so over the past week I have been doing this. Really well made. Love the third jersey http://i.imgur.com/Yz8Jexr.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crustin Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 The colors pop very well. Very nice sets and crest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 I'll tell you this because I really see potential: The only thing good about the crest are the colors. That shape isn't exactly unique,(LA Galaxy) and is incredibly detailed. Find a shape that could be telling of the city and its culture. The skyline is a definite no-go, and the shade of yellow is slightly off.(Matching the Green Bay Packers shade is a good place to start) Try and divide the crest into parts, and put indentifiers into them, like the yellow and blue stripes, the flag element, and maybe an interlocking MC.Other than that, I love the color scheme. The uniforms are really good, but I would put something else on the red kit.(Guitar strings?) Take this as constructive criticism, because I see the possibilities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaRed Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 I think this is off to a great start but I would maybe consider simplifying the crest. BlackBolt3 had some great thoughts above. I would agree that a good start would be to remove the skyline. What about doing something with music notes? Or if you did decide to change the name to Nashville FC, a simple 'N' would look sharp within a circle....then adding a few elements like the Tennessee 3 stars. I think your unis look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerrylawless3 Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 I have an idea for a shape for the crest Get inspiration from the headstock of Gibson guitars. I think that will make a unique and identifying mark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Sam Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 I do like the colors and the kits, but not crazy about the logo. I don't see it as an upgrade over what Nashville FC already has: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officerpain138 Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 Like what blackbolt3 said, a shape that comes to mind that is perfect for Nash is a guitar pick. I like the colors since they represent not only TEN but also Nashville. It is the shape that doesn't do it for me, especially after blackbolt3 mentioned the LA Galaxy similarity. Now thats all I see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaRed Posted July 18, 2015 Share Posted July 18, 2015 ^ Guitar pick is a great idea for a shape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Longhorn_8 Posted July 20, 2015 Share Posted July 20, 2015 I think a guitar pick would look awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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