kansas sports fan Posted August 18, 2015 Share Posted August 18, 2015 On the uniforms you really lose the tusk on the mint hat and jersey; you should either change the shade of green depending on the background is the only thing I can think of to fix it. Other than that I like the unis, but I think that the logo needs to be more 3D-ish. Acts 16:31 - And they replied: "Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ and you will be saved, you and your household."John 3:16 - "For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him shall not perish, but have everlasting life."John 14:6 - Jesus said to him, "I am the way, and the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father, except through me." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted August 18, 2015 Share Posted August 18, 2015 ^ Just backpedalling hard . It needs a little cleaning up but I like the concept. I think maybe if you could turn it slightly and make it sorta 3D it would be cool. I feel like the elephant could look more badass. Again though, Like the concept.No, this seriously has grown on me.Tuskers sounds nice, that would give this a more major league feel. Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted August 19, 2015 Author Share Posted August 19, 2015 So Tuskers is the general consensus? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted August 19, 2015 Share Posted August 19, 2015 It's up to you, but I agree that if you changed the logo, the name, and added an accent color such as blue or yellow, this would be like a major league team. Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SplashBoogie Posted August 19, 2015 Share Posted August 19, 2015 Hello! Took a stab at making a custom logo (never did one before) for the Oakland athletics, the now OAKLAND ELEPHANTS! Please leave c and c!!!!!You need to vary the line weights, this logo looks flat . Also I would try to round my lines, all of your curves except for the baseball (which I assume was drawn with a circle tool) are just lines connected to each other. I would also try to square the logo so it fits better on caps, uniforms etc. You can do this by bringing the trunk up a bit or by making the head bigger.Needs some work but there's potential here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted August 20, 2015 Share Posted August 20, 2015 I highly recommend your getting hold of Inkscape (free, with a built-in tutorial) or another vector-drawing program. Your logo shows the ambition of wanting to draw at that level, but your software is inhibiting you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wquarton Posted August 24, 2015 Share Posted August 24, 2015 ^Completely agree. Switched from manual paint like program to adobe illustrator and it literally saves hours and everything I've done has looked about 1000% percent better since then. Once you go vector you won't go back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted August 24, 2015 Share Posted August 24, 2015 My advice to you (take it or leave it):Drop the mint green. In its place put yellow/gold.Try to make the eye on the elephant a bit bigger and add a pupil to it.Possibly try for a full elephant head instead of just a half view of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted August 25, 2015 Author Share Posted August 25, 2015 Yeah I apologize for not updating recently. I'm trying to get it done with lots of stuff going on in my life haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 1, 2015 Author Share Posted September 1, 2015 Ignore the mint green in the elephant head logo. Another one is in the works. Here is an update with a blue color. Let me know if this is better! I also changed the name to tuskers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chawls Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 What about having the wordmark green with the thin blue outline? Also, I think the eye would look better if it wasn't as long. Quote If you hadn't noticed, Chawls loves his wrestling, whether it be real life or sim. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 2, 2015 Author Share Posted September 2, 2015 What about having the wordmark green with the thin blue outline? Also, I think the eye would look better if it wasn't as long.I'll give it a shot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted September 3, 2015 Author Share Posted September 3, 2015 Bumping Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted September 3, 2015 Share Posted September 3, 2015 The home and away jerseys have little to no green. I'd fix this for consistency purposes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1insaneguy Posted September 13, 2015 Share Posted September 13, 2015 Blue is better, but somehow it doesn't do it for me. I'd say also to drop the neon/mint green in the tusk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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