robbman21 Posted August 30, 2015 Share Posted August 30, 2015 Came up with a Kylo Ren t-shirt design (the villain from the upcoming "Star Wars - The Force Awakens") but need some feedback from you guys before I can call it "finished". The top row is silver print on black (because of the silver elements on his mask) while the bottom row has charcoal gray print to give it a more ghostly image. I'm also playing with text or no text below the mask image, with the options of "The Force Awakens" or "There's Been An Awakening". Any feedback/tips/requests you guys can give would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sport Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 I'd lose the type and go with just the head. In a few months everyone will know who that is and you won't need to tell them. I think it looks cooler without it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan33 Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 I think the top left iteration is the most effective design. When it comes to the writing, less is a more and makes sense to have the movies actual tagline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPDesign Posted August 31, 2015 Share Posted August 31, 2015 I don't know what the usage will be in the end, but I'd be cautious about using "The Force Awakens" unless you want Disney's lawyers knocking on your door.Personally, I like it without the type anyway. I also think I prefer a gray print, over silver, but maybe a hair lighter than the charcoal. Metallic silver ink just feels like a bit much for a t-shirt IMO. Something I don't think I'd wear, personally. But gray, on the other hand, I have no problems wearing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sport Billy Posted September 3, 2015 Share Posted September 3, 2015 I don't know what the usage will be in the end, but I'd be cautious about using "The Force Awakens" unless you want Disney's lawyers knocking on your door. .Isn't the entire thing outright theft?Certainly the image of Kylo Ren is protected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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