philhiney Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 This is a very rough around the edges start of a logo for a flag football team. The team are after a sabre tooth tiger that isn't so aggressive (although my style tends towards the aggressive side, so we will have to meet in the middle on that). I would love any feedback on this logo. Ive had some great feedback from this forum before so I thought it would be good to get feedback on the early stages of designs rather than just the finished article. All feedback is appreciated big or small, harsh or nice. Please note line work will be cleaned up and more colour will be added. The main areas where i am struggling is the area under the eyes. Also I'm not sure if I like the outline shape or not?! Thanks,PhilFFD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
philhiney Posted September 6, 2015 Author Share Posted September 6, 2015 Worked on a few different options for the area under the eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jrcollis714 Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 I like this a lot. Not entirely sure what it is for, but it is a nice set. Favorites: Dallas Cowboys, New York Yankees, New York Rangers, New York Knicks, Cam Newton ND Irish Least Favorites: New York Giants, New York Mets, Washington Capitals, Pittsburgh Penguins, Philadelphia Eagles, OBJ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B-mer Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 I like the last one or the middle one. I think the colored version needs some more shadows or highlights for some depth. Looks very flat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whitefoot Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 The teeth other than the 2 saber teeth need work. They look as if they are set behind the saber teeth, and they shouldn't be. Check out the teeth structure on this skull.The ears need to connect to the head better, and add more shading. The overall look is really good, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HailGoldPants Posted September 6, 2015 Share Posted September 6, 2015 Midlothian as in Midlothian, VA? Regardless, it's a great start. Check out my site at stevebcreations.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ieatstaples Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 Worked on a few different options for the area under the eyes.I think the first option looks the best. It emphasizes the cheek bones, which add to the aggressive look of the mouth. Second option looks like strange whiskers, and the third option looks tired with bags under its eyes.edit: Now that I look at it, first option kind of has the same problem as the second. Like a french-twirl mustache. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThin Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 Midlothian as in Midlothian, VA? Regardless, it's a great start.If it's Midlothian, than that's really close to me.This is looking great. I'd add a little more details to the forehead, since it looks a little empty there IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 There is something about the head shape that makes me think of a crazy squirrel instead of a feline. Not sure that I can place my finger on exactly what it is, though... Something about the roundness of the head shape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
philhiney Posted September 7, 2015 Author Share Posted September 7, 2015 This is where I'm up to: OLD / NEWThankfor for al your help, Whitefoot you changes have improves it dramatically.Im still not happy with the area under the eyes, but I quickly added some shadow to fill some space and i'm not really sure which way to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitorioArts Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 The end product looks good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaker52 Posted September 7, 2015 Share Posted September 7, 2015 It was pretty good at the start, but the update is just fantastic! MUNCHEN LOWEN (WAFA) GULF SHORES OSPREYS (IBL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
philhiney Posted September 7, 2015 Author Share Posted September 7, 2015 new / NEWERI am as happy as I've been with this logo, will start on the text soon. Any critiquing is still much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
philhiney Posted September 8, 2015 Author Share Posted September 8, 2015 Oh I forgot to mention that this is Midlothian in Scotland,UK not VA. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaRed Posted September 8, 2015 Share Posted September 8, 2015 I think you have done a phenomenal job with this logo. Great stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
philhiney Posted September 11, 2015 Author Share Posted September 11, 2015 Concept finally completed! Thankyou for everyones help! (note that the team wanted it spelling ER not RE) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 Concept finally completed! Thankyou for everyones help! (note that the team wanted it spelling ER not RE)Very cool. Well done and the total package looks strong together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerFan98 Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 That is a fantastic logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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