MontyK17 Posted April 1, 2016 Share Posted April 1, 2016 As much as i HATE sudbury, I have to admit i really like the set, nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted April 2, 2016 Share Posted April 2, 2016 The top three are good, but the faux back is where you need to adjust some things. The set is WAY too busy, I get the idea...but you need to simplify. Here's my ldea.... -use the hem design for the arms -lose the black arms -make the yoke like the arms and hem Try it and see how it looks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 4, 2016 Author Share Posted April 4, 2016 On 4/2/2016 at 8:54 PM, timberwolf said: The top three are good, but the faux back is where you need to adjust some things. The set is WAY too busy, I get the idea...but you need to simplify. Here's my ldea.... -use the hem design for the arms -lose the black arms -make the yoke like the arms and hem Try it and see how it looks. Gave it a whirl and I think it came out pretty nice. Dropped down to three stripes for the arms to match the hem/yoke. Kept the thick stripes on the arms though for the first one. Second one I matched thickness for the arm stripes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted April 4, 2016 Share Posted April 4, 2016 That's much better. I think making the black arm stripes the same length as the hem and shoulder stripes would be beneficial. It's a big improvement, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 4, 2016 Author Share Posted April 4, 2016 3 hours ago, timberwolf said: That's much better. I think making the black arm stripes the same length as the hem and shoulder stripes would be beneficial. It's a big improvement, though. Yeah I see what you meant for sure. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted April 4, 2016 Share Posted April 4, 2016 Yeah the update looks much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 4, 2016 Author Share Posted April 4, 2016 43 minutes ago, timberwolf said: Yeah the update looks much better. Have any other C&C for the rest of the series? Any and all is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 7, 2016 Author Share Posted April 7, 2016 Next up we have the Niagara Ice Dogs. Went with a clean, simple look again for their home/road set. Put together a striped bi-colour for their alternate/fauxback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 7, 2016 Author Share Posted April 7, 2016 On 4/1/2016 at 2:57 PM, MontyK17 said: As much as i HATE sudbury, I have to admit i really like the set, nice work! I can't lie, I'm not Sudbury's biggest fan either. But I had to step in and try to save them from their current piping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted April 7, 2016 Share Posted April 7, 2016 For Niagara, fill in the space between the black and red on white (with red). And the same on the red uniform (except with white obviously). Looks good, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittSmith_95 Posted April 7, 2016 Share Posted April 7, 2016 Remove the red from the arms on the Home jersey to match the bottom half. The little bit of red on the arms looks out of place. I see almost a old Sens vibe with the bottom of that home jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sportsworth Posted April 12, 2016 Share Posted April 12, 2016 Great work on all of them!!! I love the faux Petes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 14, 2016 Author Share Posted April 14, 2016 I like how a couple of teams around the league put together Remembrance Day sets so I figured I'd give it a go with the Spitfires. Two different versions, just a basic swap between the red and blue. I'm a bigger fan of the top version but let me know what you guys think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 15, 2016 Author Share Posted April 15, 2016 Moving on to the Erie Otters and my first attempt at playing with curved lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted April 15, 2016 Share Posted April 15, 2016 the design on the home and away is good but the color balance is off. You have no black on the home but lots on the away jersey. On the red jersey I would get rid of the black and swap it with blue. also change the current blue line to yellow. the alternate looks very nice though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 15, 2016 Author Share Posted April 15, 2016 1 hour ago, 72freebie said: the design on the home and away is good but the color balance is off. You have no black on the home but lots on the away jersey. On the red jersey I would get rid of the black and swap it with blue. also change the current blue line to yellow. the alternate looks very nice though. Just noticed my arm striping on my alternate is pretty similar to yours in your thread, no plagiarism intended. Big fan of your stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 18, 2016 Author Share Posted April 18, 2016 On 4/15/2016 at 6:25 PM, 72freebie said: the design on the home and away is good but the color balance is off. You have no black on the home but lots on the away jersey. On the red jersey I would get rid of the black and swap it with blue. also change the current blue line to yellow. the alternate looks very nice though. Here's an update with your suggestions: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted April 20, 2016 Author Share Posted April 20, 2016 Up next is the Saginaw Spirit. Tried a shoulder stripe pattern similar to what I used for the Firebirds. I also included two additional versions of the home sweater with slightly different yokes. I actually prefer these yokes but had trouble finding a way to translate them to the away sweater. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tkosty Posted May 3, 2016 Author Share Posted May 3, 2016 Adding in a fauxback alternate I threw together for the Owen Sound Attack. Pretty basic design, probably something most of you have seen before, but I think it looks pretty sharp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tigerslionspistonshabs Posted May 3, 2016 Share Posted May 3, 2016 The Spits Remembrance Day unis are great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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