R3G Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 Could I get some CC on this? I'm still learning. EDIT: I was trying to just do this quickly, but now I have some time. I made this recently, and I saw this, and I wanted to merge the two. The thing was that I didn't save the file as a PSD, so I was having trouble with a new font up top. And the other thing I struggled with was the stroke on the mountains. the stroke on Photoshop's stroke FX sucks so I tried to make my own but line size is tough to work with. Any advice? I'm definitely gonna revise it. Fix the font and try to fix the mountains. I'll get around to trying to make some jerseys for them as well. Thanks in advance! Check out my Instagram page! 9.5k strong! @RileyGissemanArt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MontyK17 Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 It looks good. One thing is the middle vertical line isn't centre and out of curiosity why didn't you use the Jazz's current colour scheme? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3G Posted May 5, 2016 Author Share Posted May 5, 2016 8 minutes ago, MontyK17 said: It looks good. One thing is the middle vertical line isn't centre and out of curiosity why didn't you use the Jazz's current colour scheme? Thanks! Yeah I was strugging with the stroke of the mountain. I'm gonna try to figure something out. For the color scheme, I just liked the idea of switching it up with retro colors from '98. I can change it and show everyone what it looks like with their color scheme now, though. Check out my Instagram page! 9.5k strong! @RileyGissemanArt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luke13T Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 Maybe change the outer ring to green or a color other than brown Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3G Posted May 5, 2016 Author Share Posted May 5, 2016 Here's an updated version and some color combos: Check out my Instagram page! 9.5k strong! @RileyGissemanArt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QThaGAWD Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 i like the updated versions with the jazz's current color scheme but, once i saw it , it couldn't be unseen. (the basketball with the mountains kinda look like an onion.) great work though. looking forward to your improvements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
panthers_2012 Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 The word Utah looks wired to me. Just the big gap between the T and the A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MontyK17 Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 11 hours ago, R3G said: Thanks! Yeah I was strugging with the stroke of the mountain. I'm gonna try to figure something out. For the color scheme, I just liked the idea of switching it up with retro colors from '98. I can change it and show everyone what it looks like with their color scheme now, though. To be fully honest I did not know the Jazz wore those colours ever! the Redesign all look great especially the Purple one its my favourite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JESSEDIEBOLT Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 I think the text could use some work, but the ball/mountain logo is generally pretty solid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRealPepman Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 The mountain/ball logo is perfect. Forget the circle and the 'UTAH JAZZ' text. That's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steelman Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 Interesting concept. I think the mountain range at the top of the ball should be more pronounced, seems a little small compared to everything else. I would wrap "Utah Jazz" around the bottom half of the roundel instead of trying to jam it above the mountain peaks. Or leave Jazz and have a larger "UTAH" across the middle center of the ball/roundel. Just a couple of ideas. I like the concept a lot. Nice start! Fictional Baseball Series: Torland Star League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3G Posted March 22, 2017 Author Share Posted March 22, 2017 After a while, I figured I'd post this and see what you guys think... Check out my Instagram page! 9.5k strong! @RileyGissemanArt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeauxColonels Posted March 22, 2017 Share Posted March 22, 2017 1 hour ago, R3G said: After a while, I figured I'd post this and see what you guys think... This is a step in the right direction, IMO. However, the mountain peaks are way too small. Any smaller application of this logo would make this difficult to replicate and the peaks would more than likely get lost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YYCB Posted March 22, 2017 Share Posted March 22, 2017 Your logo's not bad but I've always wondered why most NBA logos have to incorporate a basketball? Also - I really wish the Jazz would change their name to reflect Utah instead of New Orleans. Just like the Lakers - the name makes zero sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VDizzle12 Posted March 22, 2017 Share Posted March 22, 2017 11 minutes ago, brycew8 said: Your logo's not bad but I've always wondered why most NBA logos have to incorporate a basketball? Also - I really wish the Jazz would change their name to reflect Utah instead of New Orleans. Just like the Lakers - the name makes zero sense. I thought it used to be a rule or something that every primary logo must incorporate a basketball and have the full team name. But I guess that theory is wrong, since the Spurs, Blazers, Bulls and Nuggets have never really had a basketball in their logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YYCB Posted March 22, 2017 Share Posted March 22, 2017 If that's true, that's pretty crazy. Can you imagine if every NFL logo had to include a football or every NHL logo had to incorporate a puck or hockey stick? Yikes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted March 22, 2017 Share Posted March 22, 2017 45 minutes ago, VDizzle12 said: I thought it used to be a rule or something that every primary logo must incorporate a basketball and have the full team name. But I guess that theory is wrong, since the Spurs, Blazers, Bulls and Nuggets have never really had a basketball in their logo. It's not a requirement, but it's proved a helpful marketing tool as the NBA has expanded its reach into parts of the world previously unfamiliar with basketball. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3G Posted March 23, 2017 Author Share Posted March 23, 2017 Here's another revision. Check out my Instagram page! 9.5k strong! @RileyGissemanArt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalCookie Posted March 23, 2017 Share Posted March 23, 2017 5 hours ago, VDizzle12 said: I thought it used to be a rule or something that every primary logo must incorporate a basketball and have the full team name. But I guess that theory is wrong, since the Spurs, Blazers, Bulls and Nuggets have never really had a basketball in their logo. It's a requirement for just a logo in a team's logoset to have a basketball, and the primary to have the full team name. Old logos (such as the Spurs') are grandfathered in, but if they ever change, then they would have to either fit a basketball into their current logo or make a new logo with a basketball in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3G Posted March 24, 2017 Author Share Posted March 24, 2017 Bump to get more feedback on the last revision Check out my Instagram page! 9.5k strong! @RileyGissemanArt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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