Jstn1586 Posted September 16, 2016 Share Posted September 16, 2016 hey guys/gals im new at this still, but was just sketching up some concept logos and i started really thinking of the titans, and how they are rebuilding under their new qb ect ect, so thought id throw this out there, feedback would be awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seancarter Posted September 16, 2016 Share Posted September 16, 2016 don't miss with my teams logo it's perfectly fine as is right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jujubeans Posted September 16, 2016 Share Posted September 16, 2016 Far too much red and gray for a team whose primary colors are navy blue and sky blue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted September 16, 2016 Share Posted September 16, 2016 1 hour ago, seancarter said: don't miss with my teams logo it's perfectly fine as is right now That's the point of this board buddy. It's honestly not a bad start. If you're trying to concentrate on the greek titan aspect of it, I think the roundel is unnecessary. It actually cuts off part of the centerpiece, the actual greek guy. Try only using the the helmet for now, maybe a roundel secondary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan O'Mac Posted September 16, 2016 Share Posted September 16, 2016 A couple critiques. 1) The outlines on the two stars are different shades of blue. 2) There should be three stars. The stars on the existing logo is pulled from the Tennessee state flag. 3) I would keep the flames coming off the logo, personally, and go with a more traditional helmet with the "hair" up there. I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
henburg Posted September 16, 2016 Share Posted September 16, 2016 6 hours ago, seancarter said: don't miss with my teams logo it's perfectly fine as is right now First, don't listen to this guy. As a Titans fan I personally don't like our logos at all, and I think that many other people feel the same. Moving on, I really like the start you have going here, the typeface you chose for the wordmark looks great, and the plume on the helmet being flames is a really neat idea. As far as ways to improve, I think that it would be a good idea to remove the circle around the head, it has a lot of negative space and just kinda seems unnecessary in my opinion. Also the reason the current Titans logo has stars is due to the tri-star on the Tennessee flag, so this logo having only two stars doesn't make much sense. I would either find another way to incorporate a tri-star into the logo (maybe on the helmet?) or just remove it altogether. Finally, I think that you have way too many colors going on here, I would simplify it to a maximum of three. I think that if you do some of these changes the logo will improve greatly, and as I said before, you're already off to a really nice start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sgriffin0110 Posted September 16, 2016 Share Posted September 16, 2016 Would love to see some unis for this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StrongXStyle Posted September 17, 2016 Share Posted September 17, 2016 The wordmark is looks great. It looks very clean and has a greek feel to it. I think the points on N needs to be reduced because it throws the wordmark off balance a little bit. For the logo, I think having just the helmet of your titan logo will look better. Overall it is a good start, workmark is keeper for me and face logo needs changing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C-Squared Posted September 17, 2016 Share Posted September 17, 2016 On 9/16/2016 at 0:47 PM, seancarter said: don't miss with my teams logo it's perfectly fine as is right now You're right. It won't be missed. My TeePublic Shop My Instagram Art Page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jstn1586 Posted September 21, 2016 Author Share Posted September 21, 2016 awesome feedback thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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