jay_fs_designs Posted October 19, 2016 Share Posted October 19, 2016 Here's another series presented by Jay_FS_Designs: I'm creating hockey jerseys for all current NFL teams. For some teams I'm transferring the current jersey designs onto a hockey jersey. For others I create a complete new design the fits the identity. All feedback appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jay_fs_designs Posted October 19, 2016 Author Share Posted October 19, 2016 First team is Arizona. I decided to give them a new design rather than simply transferring their current jersey striping as this is more hockey-esque Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaGrandeOrange Posted October 19, 2016 Share Posted October 19, 2016 With the colour scheme and lettering/numbering, it's hard to disassociate this with the Coyotes. That said,it's pretty good on its own- something about the numbers are off to me- I think it may be the outlines, specifically on the darker numbers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jay_fs_designs Posted October 21, 2016 Author Share Posted October 21, 2016 The second team is Atlanta. This may look a bit "simple". But I think it fits the logo and the colours very well. Let's hear some feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OrangeRush Posted October 21, 2016 Share Posted October 21, 2016 I dig the Falcons! I agree that they're perhaps a touch too simple, but the Falcons' actual jerseys are way too busy so I don't think simple is a bad thing here. I wish the font were a bit blockier but that's just a personal thing - the more rounded font looks fine, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jay_fs_designs Posted October 22, 2016 Author Share Posted October 22, 2016 Thx for the feedback so far next up are the Ravens from Baltimore. Any opinions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted October 22, 2016 Share Posted October 22, 2016 This needs more gold, plain and simple. Although i like the overall look, theres too much white on the home and away. I would either thicken the current gold lines on the home or make whats currently white gold, and the same for the away. Tweak and this'll be sick  But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/    Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted October 23, 2016 Share Posted October 23, 2016 I think it needs more black than white. I'd try switching the stripes/yoke on the home to black, and the yoke to black or purple on the away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
worcat Posted October 23, 2016 Share Posted October 23, 2016 11 hours ago, jay_fs_designs said: Thx for the feedback so far next up are the Ravens from Baltimore. Any opinions? I could see Baltimore using the shield logo as the main and the raven head as an alternate. It'd be very LA King-ish Bleeding Blue since 1986 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jay_fs_designs Posted October 23, 2016 Author Share Posted October 23, 2016 I made a few adjustments based on the feedback from you guys. Let's hear it  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted October 23, 2016 Share Posted October 23, 2016 In the Ravens case, you might want to make some adjustments on the back of the jerseys, too! On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc?   Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jay_fs_designs Posted October 24, 2016 Author Share Posted October 24, 2016 On 23.10.2016 at 4:36 PM, Brass said: In the Ravens case, you might want to make some adjustments on the back of the jerseys, too! like what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jay_fs_designs Posted October 24, 2016 Author Share Posted October 24, 2016 The Buffalo Bills are up next. For this one I took the striping from their real jerseys and just added some hockey-esque things to make it look more realistic. Opinions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted October 24, 2016 Share Posted October 24, 2016 On 10/23/2016 at 10:31 AM, jay_fs_designs said: I made a few adjustments based on the feedback from you guys. Let's hear it   Not sure which set I like better, these both look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted October 24, 2016 Share Posted October 24, 2016 Bills look good too, but I don't they need the faux-yoke on the home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chcarlson23 Posted October 24, 2016 Share Posted October 24, 2016 1 hour ago, ahowe6464 said: Bills look good too, but I don't they need the faux-yoke on the home. Almost every single one of the concepts you make has the exact same Boston Bruin-esque shoulder yoke... I mean they look good, but you can definitely get more creative... "And those who know Your Name put their trust in You, for You, O Lord, have not forsaken those who seek You." Psalms 9:10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jay_fs_designs Posted October 26, 2016 Author Share Posted October 26, 2016 On 24.10.2016 at 9:16 PM, chcarlson23 said: Almost every single one of the concepts you make has the exact same Boston Bruin-esque shoulder yoke... I mean they look good, but you can definitely get more creative... Â Of course I know that this part looks similar on many of my concepts but tbh I think that there is only one or two types of shoulder yokes that acutually look good on this template. If you check out my ECHL series on here you can see that I use different designs on that other template.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jay_fs_designs Posted October 26, 2016 Author Share Posted October 26, 2016 for what it's worth here's a new one and it got a different shoulder design. Let's hear the verdict on the Panthers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaGrandeOrange Posted October 26, 2016 Share Posted October 26, 2016 That alt is very "minor league hockey" to me, so it works. I think this is the most enjoyable thusfar, perhaps because their aesthetic looks so much better with white in place of silver. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahowe6464 Posted October 27, 2016 Share Posted October 27, 2016 I like Carolina, although I'm not a fan of the alternate patch. That's really my only complaint, this set looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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