P.I.L.L. Posted November 22, 2016 Author Share Posted November 22, 2016 6 hours ago, Uglybus said: 5 hours ago, Bruins said: Not too "constructive". Theres been a gradual improvement here, and this is a pretty unique concept, especially both jet logos. It's alright. At least ugly offered some kind of genuine CC... about the italics and captains patch: Winnipeg / Jets wordmarks are now skewed a bit more upright, by a couple of degrees. Also, color count is at 4.5 all together, not 7! Thanks... __________________________________________ Color REVISION: 11/22/16 , tightening of stick / puck engine as well. Muchas Gracias, amigo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedfieldNick Posted November 22, 2016 Share Posted November 22, 2016 It's an interesting idea, and you have made good progress, but you need to choose one shade of blue, and maybe take the black out and put red in. Welcome to Kansas, where you can see your future, literally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted November 22, 2016 Author Share Posted November 22, 2016 Color REVISION: 11/22/16 , tightening of stick / puck engine as well. Muchas Gracias, amigo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedfieldNick Posted November 23, 2016 Share Posted November 23, 2016 14 hours ago, P.I.L.L. said: Color REVISION: 11/22/16 , tightening of stick / puck engine as well. Muchas Gracias, amigo. Oh, I was only thinking about taking black out all together, because with black and navy, the scheme is too dark in my eyes, and giving red a lot more of a presence. And maybe keeping the white jersey, just modifying it for the new colors Welcome to Kansas, where you can see your future, literally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted November 30, 2016 Author Share Posted November 30, 2016 REVISED: 11/29/16 ~ Return to Jet Black / Electric Blue combination for center jersey... Further tweaked puck-engine on both jets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted December 1, 2016 Author Share Posted December 1, 2016 11/30/16: Pardon the multiple color revisions... closing in on Final. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedfieldNick Posted December 1, 2016 Share Posted December 1, 2016 Red numbers on blue jersey, then its perfect Welcome to Kansas, where you can see your future, literally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted December 2, 2016 Author Share Posted December 2, 2016 REVISED: 12/01/16~ Back in (jet) Black ... further refined puck-engine and stick on both vertical stabilizers - 2) Jets word mark tribute to "J" hockey stick of original Winnipeg Jets logo design. Genuine Thanks for the C.C. ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldconcepts Posted December 2, 2016 Share Posted December 2, 2016 It's getting better, but by colours, I meant keeping the concept to a strictly red-blue-white or blue-blue -white scheme... No black or grey or silver... Twitter: @ldconcepts / Instagram: @ld.concepts / Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedfieldNick Posted December 2, 2016 Share Posted December 2, 2016 3 hours ago, ldconcepts said: It's getting better, but by colours, I meant keeping the concept to a strictly red-blue-white or blue-blue -white scheme... No black or grey or silver... I think grey could work in the scheme, but as an accent, not a full color Welcome to Kansas, where you can see your future, literally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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P.I.L.L. Posted May 7, 2017 Author Share Posted May 7, 2017 Updated 05/6/17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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P.I.L.L. Posted May 14, 2017 Author Share Posted May 14, 2017 feeling closer to finish line of this marathon!!! ~Genuine THANKS for the previous suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted September 11, 2017 Author Share Posted September 11, 2017 Updated 9-11-17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted January 11, 2018 Author Share Posted January 11, 2018 Updated 1/10/18 ; refined / streamlined both jets versions... Jets black and red jerseys + pucks. C.C always welcome... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted January 11, 2018 Share Posted January 11, 2018 The picture isn't showing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCM0313 Posted January 11, 2018 Share Posted January 11, 2018 1 hour ago, Whittier S said: The picture isn't showing. Seconded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted January 11, 2018 Author Share Posted January 11, 2018 posted the link again and it shows up on my page ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigRed618 Posted January 11, 2018 Share Posted January 11, 2018 Loving the wordmark, although the gray trim might be too thick... And I don’t really care for them wearing black either, but that’s a matter of taste. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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