Htown1141 Posted January 6, 2017 Share Posted January 6, 2017 I made this a few years back when I originally started to work on a CFB series that fizzled out. I recently cleaned some of it up and worked on it a bit over the break, and as always, C&C appreciated. I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Bird91 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 This looks pretty good. Although to me, it looks a bit awkward because there is a lot of fur detail around the face, and then the outline is kind of bland for lack of better word. My advise would be to add some work to the outline and it'll be a solid logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 Ok so let's try this. The fur detail that's the closest to the nose, take that completely off and see how that looks. In my opinion, it'll make it look a lot less busy on there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted January 7, 2017 Author Share Posted January 7, 2017 I tried both your options, here are the results. @Broncoboy7@T-Bird91 and then both suggestions combined. Let me know what y'all think! I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 Both suggestions combined actually looks pretty good! I like it better than all of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCM0313 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 If you can't get it to look right, maybe it's because Michigan sucks! Glad to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whitefoot Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 The logo is very flat. The high contrasting colors you are using for the details do not give the image any depth. You may need to introduce a 4th color for highlights or lowlights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted January 7, 2017 Author Share Posted January 7, 2017 18 minutes ago, Whitefoot said: The logo is very flat. The high contrasting colors you are using for the details do not give the image any depth. You may need to introduce a 4th color for highlights or lowlights. One of the bottom work? I also added the 2 color one (I don't count white as a color when it comes to logos ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ) I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Bird91 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 Really liking where it's come. @Broncoboy7 had a god suggestion that worked as well. Not quite sure the light blue is really clicking for me highlight/lowlight-wise, but this isn't my concept. You do you and keep at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted January 7, 2017 Author Share Posted January 7, 2017 @T-Bird91 Maybe white? I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Bird91 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 I digging the white. Others may say otherwise, so just keep your mind open to any ideas, man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavePunter Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 Keep the white in the eye, nose, ear, and tooth, but I'd suggest maybe a darker mustard-ier yellow/gold in place of the rest of the white Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted January 7, 2017 Author Share Posted January 7, 2017 17 minutes ago, WavePunter said: Keep the white in the eye, nose, ear, and tooth, but I'd suggest maybe a darker mustard-ier yellow/gold in place of the rest of the white Like so? I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavePunter Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 14 minutes ago, Htown1141 said: Like so? Yeah, that about what I had in mind.. I think helps in the spots where it exists, but it leaves the rest of the logo lacking.. Not sure how much of the darker gold to add to the back half of the logo, but I think you could be a little heavier with it, which would keep most of the highlights and focus on the face, but I'm not exactly sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MCM0313 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 2 hours ago, Htown1141 said: One of the bottom work? I also added the 2 color one (I don't count white as a color when it comes to logos ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ) Bottom left adds more color variation AND solves the problem of it being Michigan. Great logo for the UCLA Bruins! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted January 7, 2017 Author Share Posted January 7, 2017 I was thinking if the chargers had a bearverine, it'd be a decent logo with a few changes XD Basketball court mockup btw I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted January 7, 2017 Author Share Posted January 7, 2017 9 minutes ago, WavePunter said: Yeah, that about what I had in mind.. I think helps in the spots where it exists, but it leaves the rest of the logo lacking.. Not sure how much of the darker gold to add to the back half of the logo, but I think you could be a little heavier with it, which would keep most of the highlights and focus on the face, but I'm not exactly sure That's what I was thinking. I've been playing around with similar color schemes for a while now, but I just can't find the perfect look. I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted January 7, 2017 Author Share Posted January 7, 2017 1 2 3 4 When did polls go away? Anywho, leave what you think should be used. Rank them if you'd wish I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 My vote goes to #1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldconcepts Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 10 hours ago, Htown1141 said: 1 2 3 4 When did polls go away? Anywho, leave what you think should be used. Rank them if you'd wish If you edit the first post there should be a poll option Twitter: @ldconcepts / Instagram: @ld.concepts / Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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