JayG2024 Posted January 17, 2017 Share Posted January 17, 2017 I offered my design "skills" (I'm no pro, I just do it for fun) to my aunt who is a wedding/event planner (also just for fun). She wanted a more professional looking logo to place on her invites, cards, stationary, and other printed media. Her "company" is called Designs By Deirdre. She wants to incorporate a snowflake and she absolutely loves anything sparkling, shining, blinging, and most importantly elegant and high class. I feel great about the wordmark but I am stuck on the snowflake and how to make it sparkle with elegance. I put together a few different variations of this logo, as I am not particularly pleased with any one over another. Please C&C, I need some help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted January 17, 2017 Share Posted January 17, 2017 For the D inside the snowflake, it needs to be wider and I'd switch the colors on it so it's visible in monochrome. Right now it's a glob on the middle. If you're not planning to have the snowflake as it's own stand alone logo I'd consider shrinking it and tossing the D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted January 17, 2017 Share Posted January 17, 2017 I can't read the script at all... And the snowflake awkwardly competes with the text. I would try a whole other approach here. Some simpler text and a more simplistic snowflake. This one is way too busy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchie Posted January 17, 2017 Share Posted January 17, 2017 5 hours ago, CreamSoda said: I can't read the script at all... And the snowflake awkwardly competes with the text. I would try a whole other approach here. Some simpler text and a more simplistic snowflake. This one is way too busy. Agreed about the elements competing in most of your versions. One easy way to fix that would be to use lesser weight on your snowflakes' outlines. @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DTConcepts Posted January 18, 2017 Share Posted January 18, 2017 I actually like the thick outlines. I do think a splash of color on the 'D' would help you out a ton here. Also, the font should probably change. It's hard to read, especially at a glance. "You ain't gonna learn what you don't wanna know..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Tsubasa Posted January 24, 2017 Share Posted January 24, 2017 The wordmark looks the best in the top row, but as others have said, the snowflake with the D on top of it does not blend well. Just use a nice looking snowflake (a little bit smaller) next to the wordmark. Or maybe build a snowflake out of multiple D's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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