GriffinM6 Posted February 4, 2017 Author Share Posted February 4, 2017 6 hours ago, ~Bear said: The river is inconsistent in width. Not that all rivers are equal, but it still looks wonky for a crest. The farthest turn in the background could be scrapped to help the river look less 'drawn' as @Broncoboy7pointed out. To help with this, maybe thicken the river's outline as well. I'd also change the 'EST. 2017' to cyan to pop against the teal. Love the color scheme and the sublimated river on the jerseys. Overall, good job on this one. Good suggestions. Here's the updated look for Chattahoochee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 4, 2017 Author Share Posted February 4, 2017 Next up is King and Queen FC. What does this name mean? Well, the names comes from the two famous buildings that have stood next to each other since 1991. The club's crest proudly features the tops of the two buildings. I chose purple and gold for the color scheme a. because I like Orlando City's identity and b. because King and Queen = royalty and the color for royalty is purple. The kits feature the tops of the buildings from the crest sublimated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted February 4, 2017 Share Posted February 4, 2017 So here is what I have to comment on this set. The outline of the buildings in the background of the jerseys just seems misplaced. Either find a different spot for it and take it out all together. Also for the logo, what's the purpose of the lion? I know it may symbolize royalty, but if you are mainly focusing on the buildings, it's better to just leave that Lion out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenonDesigns Posted February 5, 2017 Share Posted February 5, 2017 In my opinion, if you're going to make the text on the crest that large it should only say something like 'KQFC' not the entire name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 7, 2017 Author Share Posted February 7, 2017 So here are some updates to King and Queen FC. Took @XenonDesigns suggestion and put "KQFC" in the crest. The kits got an update with the new crest. The primary has the back striping over the chest now and the secondary features a 90s design on the front. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StaatsBrett Posted February 7, 2017 Share Posted February 7, 2017 I like it sould have the retro Adidas logo for the away kit since the 90's design would work with the design I'm really excited about the other teams http://i.imgur.com/4gh4ZhB.png http://i.imgur.com/DmN6VqA.png http://boards.sportslogos.net/topic/103365-star-based-championship-signatures-by-request/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted February 7, 2017 Share Posted February 7, 2017 That pattern on the white kit chest is WAY TOO busy. You can't really tell that the "FastSigns" is there but the colors are not corresponding. I suggest using the same pattern that you did on the yellow kit, and it'll look better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 7, 2017 Author Share Posted February 7, 2017 9 hours ago, Broncoboy7 said: That pattern on the white kit chest is WAY TOO busy. You can't really tell that the "FastSigns" is there but the colors are not corresponding. I suggest using the same pattern that you did on the yellow kit, and it'll look better. Updated the white to clean up the area around the logos. Anyway, here's the Brunswick Islanders, the first team from the Southern Conference. Here are the kits. Primary is monochrome blue, white the away features chevrons on the chest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 8, 2017 Author Share Posted February 8, 2017 Bump. Anything for Brunswick? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenonDesigns Posted February 8, 2017 Share Posted February 8, 2017 I think it would look better without the little firework on the walmart logo, just the wordmark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 13, 2017 Author Share Posted February 13, 2017 Sorry for the delay on the next team. Here's the Savannah Colonials. The four stars featured on the crest represent Georgia being the 4th state to ratify the US constitution in 1788. The 1733 represents the year that Savannah became a city. The primary kits features horizontal, alternating navy and gold stripes while the secondary has vertical, sublimated stripes. Also featured on the right sleeves and lower right side of the shorts are the four stars to represent Georgia as the fourth state. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoGamecocks29 Posted February 14, 2017 Share Posted February 14, 2017 As a Savannahian, I'm liking what you came up with. Although, you misspelled "Oglethorpe." PHI ALPHA! SIGMA ALPHA EPSILON. CAROLINA GAMECOCKS. ST. LOUIS CARDINALS. ST. LOUIS BLUES. ORLANDO CITY SC. JACKSONVILLE JAGUARS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broncoboy7 Posted February 14, 2017 Share Posted February 14, 2017 This is probably your best set yet! Great job, but yes, Oglethorpe is spelled wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pulv! Posted February 14, 2017 Share Posted February 14, 2017 To help the Chattahoochee logo looking even better I might suggest you to eliminate the black from the logo. You can use the two tone blues for all the different parts. This usually helps logos to look less simply drawn. Your Savannah logo is so good! All is enhanced by having a good unique bold color outline. My Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 17, 2017 Author Share Posted February 17, 2017 Next up is State Line FC based out of Valdosta. The crest is based off of AC Milan's. The V represents the city of Valdosta. Next are the kits. The primary features black pinstripes on an orange jersey while the secondary has a dotted belly stripe. Hope you guys like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cubsfan2015 Posted February 17, 2017 Share Posted February 17, 2017 State Line looks so beautiful. The colors remind me of A&W. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 19, 2017 Author Share Posted February 19, 2017 Bump. Probably posting Albany tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 26, 2017 Author Share Posted February 26, 2017 Sorry for the absence, guys. Next up is Albany 1838. The logo features a piano in honor of Albany-born Ray Charles. The primary kit is rather simple with shoulder stripes, but the secondary features piano keys down the right side of the jersey and shorts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted February 27, 2017 Author Share Posted February 27, 2017 Bump. Anything guys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenonDesigns Posted February 27, 2017 Share Posted February 27, 2017 I think the design on State Line's secondary would look better if it was subliminal because most of the details are far too small. As for Albany, the crest looks sorta boring but if you made it a true rounded and got rid of the white in the back it would be better imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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