coco1997 Posted April 22, 2017 Share Posted April 22, 2017 1 hour ago, Victormrey said: What do you think? Nah, I think you need to fill in the negative space of the "a" in "Bay" with white. Alternatively, if it ends up not working, you could have the Rays be like the Phillies and just use their home wordmark on all their jerseys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victormrey Posted April 22, 2017 Author Share Posted April 22, 2017 1 hour ago, coco1997 said: Nah, I think you need to fill in the negative space of the "a" in "Bay" with white. Alternatively, if it ends up not working, you could have the Rays be like the Phillies and just use their home wordmark on all their jerseys. I tried it with white inside the suburst bit it looks odd. About using only the Rays wordmark, it'd make sense since that's what they do now. Although, I'd like to use the Tampa Bay wordmark as well, so I decided to give it a try: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coco1997 Posted April 22, 2017 Share Posted April 22, 2017 Yeah, I'm still not feeling it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SFGiants58 Posted April 22, 2017 Share Posted April 22, 2017 4 hours ago, Victormrey said: I tried it with white inside the suburst bit it looks odd. About using only the Rays wordmark, it'd make sense since that's what they do now. Although, I'd like to use the Tampa Bay wordmark as well, so I decided to give it a try: I like it. My suggestion would be to try the sunburst on either "a" in "Tampa," have the ray encompass a smaller wordmark, or add a white outline to the current one (since light blue has issues showing up on darker greys). Adding the sunburst to a "TB" would work too. You gotta have a "Tampa Bay" or "TB" wordmark. It's one of the current look's biggest problems, and I think one of those solutions can fix it. MLB: Project 32 (Complete), MLB: The Defunct Saga (Complete) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victormrey Posted April 22, 2017 Author Share Posted April 22, 2017 41 minutes ago, SFGiants58 said: I like it. My suggestion would be to try the sunburst on either "a" in "Tampa," have the ray encompass a smaller wordmark, or add a white outline to the current one (since light blue has issues showing up on darker greys). Adding the sunburst to a "TB" would work too. You gotta have a "Tampa Bay" or "TB" wordmark. It's one of the current look's biggest problems, and I think one of those solutions can fix it. I didn't want to use it on the "Tampa" due to the double A. I don't like how road wordmarks look like w/ white outline (e.g. the Tigers). I like the idea of using the TB. BTW, how about inverting the colours? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SFGiants58 Posted April 22, 2017 Share Posted April 22, 2017 3 minutes ago, Victormrey said: I didn't want to use it on the "Tampa" due to the double A. I don't like how road wordmarks look like w/ white outline (e.g. the Tigers). I like the idea of using the TB. BTW, how about inverting the colours? That looks pretty good. Go for it. Of course, if you want to keep wordmark dimensions smaller, go with a "TB" on the chest. A "TB" that uses the "T" and "B" from this script would be excellent. MLB: Project 32 (Complete), MLB: The Defunct Saga (Complete) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victormrey Posted April 22, 2017 Author Share Posted April 22, 2017 1 hour ago, SFGiants58 said: That looks pretty good. Go for it. Of course, if you want to keep wordmark dimensions smaller, go with a "TB" on the chest. A "TB" that uses the "T" and "B" from this script would be excellent. How about using the TB from the cap for the road alt? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SFGiants58 Posted April 22, 2017 Share Posted April 22, 2017 5 minutes ago, Victormrey said: How about using the TB from the cap for the road alt? I don't really like the lowercase letters "TB" cap. Use the capital letters from the "Tampa Bay" script to make the "TB" logo (with the letters arranged like the current cap logo), and I think you'd be set. MLB: Project 32 (Complete), MLB: The Defunct Saga (Complete) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victormrey Posted April 23, 2017 Author Share Posted April 23, 2017 I decided to try three combinations for the monogram: Which one do you prefer? I'm really digging @SFGiants58 idea. And here's the road uniform with the alt wordmark: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Lucas Posted April 23, 2017 Share Posted April 23, 2017 I think the first one, great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coco1997 Posted April 23, 2017 Share Posted April 23, 2017 I don't think the "TB" should be directly next to each other, but the "B" should be lower than the "T," as @SFGiants58 suggested. http://www.sportslogos.net/logos/view/i1hz1w5ehzpt71c5da51otd7g/Tampa_Bay_Rays/2008/Cap_Logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victormrey Posted April 23, 2017 Author Share Posted April 23, 2017 46 minutes ago, coco1997 said: I don't think the "TB" should be directly next to each other, but the "B" should be lower than the "T," as @SFGiants58 suggested. http://www.sportslogos.net/logos/view/i1hz1w5ehzpt71c5da51otd7g/Tampa_Bay_Rays/2008/Cap_Logo True! I forgot to try that style: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coco1997 Posted April 23, 2017 Share Posted April 23, 2017 41 minutes ago, Victormrey said: True! I forgot to try that style: Yep, that's the winner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victormrey Posted April 23, 2017 Author Share Posted April 23, 2017 The Rays set has been updated: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Lucas Posted April 23, 2017 Share Posted April 23, 2017 Well done. ?????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victormrey Posted April 23, 2017 Author Share Posted April 23, 2017 38 minutes ago, Paul Lucas said: Well done. ?????? Thank you! And thanks to those who have helped me to improve the Rays set! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SFGiants58 Posted April 23, 2017 Share Posted April 23, 2017 2 hours ago, Victormrey said: Thank you! And thanks to those who have helped me to improve the Rays set! We're more than happy to help! You've done an excellent job with the Rays, and I look forward to the AL Central. MLB: Project 32 (Complete), MLB: The Defunct Saga (Complete) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coco1997 Posted April 23, 2017 Share Posted April 23, 2017 I hate to beat a dead horse, but I still don't like the way the ray of light looks on the road jersey and home alt. It's a sun ray--it's supposed to be bright colored, not gray. It works on the road alt and cap logo because it has to contrast with the white "TB." That's just my .02 cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victormrey Posted April 24, 2017 Author Share Posted April 24, 2017 9 hours ago, coco1997 said: I hate to beat a dead horse, but I still don't like the way the ray of light looks on the road jersey and home alt. It's a sun ray--it's supposed to be bright colored, not gray. It works on the road alt and cap logo because it has to contrast with the white "TB." That's just my .02 cents. No problem, thanks for the constructive criticism I think the Sunburst stands out enough with the border. Imo, white inside of it would look weird, specially for the road uni, but I may try it in the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victormrey Posted April 24, 2017 Author Share Posted April 24, 2017 Let's finish the ALE with the Blue Jays! I think the Blue Jays did a great job back in 2012, creating a perfect (and maybe even timeless) look. That's why I haven't made too many changes. The home and home alt cap features now a white front, the alt uniform has been replaced for the buttonless template, and now the Canada Day uniform only features red and white. As in my Tweak Series, I would like to thank @Carolingian Steamroller for borrowing me his #19. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.