VitorioArts Posted May 26, 2017 Share Posted May 26, 2017 Hey Guys! It's been awhile but I'm back with an inline hockey logo! I took the Hershey Bears logo as inspiration mainly because of how mean and intimidating the logo looked. I chose a "Deer" because where the team is located in Northeast Pennsylvania, there is an abundance of white-tailed deer. Of course, I had to use black and gold because...well, i just really like those colors for a hockey team! (Go Pens!) Hope you guys like this one! C&C Welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrWonka Posted May 26, 2017 Share Posted May 26, 2017 The only gripe I have right now is the watermark. I understand the use but it kind of makes some of the detail lost to totally get what im looking at. From what I can see I'm wondering if the antlers I'm seeing has a different perspective than the head. One thing I've always had a problem with were antlers with logos. Only other thing right now is he might be starting to look more wolf or bear with the nose area. It's very boxy and wide while white-tailed deer have a more pointed smaller nose. Very nice linework though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitorioArts Posted May 26, 2017 Author Share Posted May 26, 2017 1 hour ago, MrWonka said: The only gripe I have right now is the watermark. I understand the use but it kind of makes some of the detail lost to totally get what im looking at. From what I can see I'm wondering if the antlers I'm seeing has a different perspective than the head. One thing I've always had a problem with were antlers with logos. Only other thing right now is he might be starting to look more wolf or bear with the nose area. It's very boxy and wide while white-tailed deer have a more pointed smaller nose. Very nice linework though. First off, thanks! Second, yeah sorry about the watermark, went a little heavy there. And I see what you mean! Changes are coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitorioArts Posted May 27, 2017 Author Share Posted May 27, 2017 Okay! What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WavePunter Posted May 27, 2017 Share Posted May 27, 2017 The eyes are almost a 3/4 view, while the mouth and antlers are more profile.. I think that's what MrWonka is seeing.. It's tough to tell if that yellow spot just to the right of the eye is part of the brow of that eye, or if it's the brow of the opposite eye.. If it's the opposite eye, then it's more 3/4 view and the other features need adjusting, but if it's the visible eye, it meshes with the rest of the logo conceptually, just needs a bit more refinement.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whitefoot Posted May 27, 2017 Share Posted May 27, 2017 For a 3/4 view you really need both antlers. The black outline around the antlers seems very thick compared to the rest of the logo. It is also odd that there are four points on the antler and five points on the outline (no alignment). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted May 29, 2017 Share Posted May 29, 2017 I'd maybe add a neck and include a wordmark below it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitorioArts Posted September 9, 2017 Author Share Posted September 9, 2017 Just an Idea I had, thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruins Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 I think you need to update your account to enable 3rd party hosting But God demonstrates His own love toward us, in that while we were still sinners, Christ died for us. Romans 5:8/ Check Out My: Little Big League MLB Project/ Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitorioArts Posted September 10, 2017 Author Share Posted September 10, 2017 Haha let's try this again, its just an idea...thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted September 10, 2017 Share Posted September 10, 2017 First impression was that this was a square-ish leaf logo, like the Maple Leafs. Second impression was a highway sign. My brain is really struggling to see the antlers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitorioArts Posted September 17, 2017 Author Share Posted September 17, 2017 Okay, how do we feel about this concept? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted September 17, 2017 Share Posted September 17, 2017 5 hours ago, VitorioArts said: Okay, how do we feel about this concept? Much better, I would suggest thinning the stroke on the deer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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VitorioArts Posted February 3, 2018 Author Share Posted February 3, 2018 Starting a new thread! time for this one to go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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