YelichGraphics Posted August 21, 2017 Author Share Posted August 21, 2017 37 minutes ago, MJWalker45 said: For the Rams home, horns on the sleeves should be yellow as well. For consistency, i agree. It looks a little off, ill post one with the yellow horns, but im more sold on the white ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 Sorry, it took so long.. football started up. anyways i think its too much yellow but ill let you decide on yellow or white horns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 Not going to lie a lot of inspiration to this set was from past Notre Dame Shamrock Series uniforms. Even the helmet has a chromish finish. I also added a bolder gold and made the black more of a charcoal color. But honestly, it pulled together and made one of my favorite creations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted September 4, 2017 Author Share Posted September 4, 2017 Got a lot on this one. Also the LV is for the move in a few years. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted September 6, 2017 Author Share Posted September 6, 2017 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htown1141 Posted September 6, 2017 Share Posted September 6, 2017 A few things: Miami is fine. Just fine. The block numbers are a strange contrast with the otherwise modern set, and it can work, I'm just not feelin' it too much. I do like the M you made. Maybe add a nameplate and see if you can come up with a font that suits the set more, maybe even the current font. The Chargers aren't really my cup of tea. I like the concept, but leave the yoke color to the yoke, otherwise it looks just kinda weird. Maybe take off the full wordmark, just leave "CHARGERS" and then I think the set is vastly improved. Numbers on the helmets are also fine, and I am glad you matched the jersey numbers with the helmet numbers. The Jets are, well, interesting.(?) That's a lot of black, dude. Take off the shoulder numbers, sir and I think it looks a lot better. Maybe make a pants stripe that is similar to the shoulder stripe and I think it could be one of the better Jets concepts out there. Vanilla. Mother. Whale. This should not be an athletic font. It looks good, sure, but should it REALLY be on a classic uniform like the Colts? No. Pick a simpler but still semi-modern font (IDK any, but I'm sure out of the both us, we've stockpiled at least 250 fonts. One's gotta work.) then it becomes perfect. For the Rams, certain double outlines need to die. This is one of them. I love the creativity with the Saints. Minimize the size of the Fleur de lis and that one is easily my favorite one you've made so far. I love the Raiders logo, but I don't think it should have an updated helmet. It reminds me of a military helmet or like one of those climbing people's helmets (yes, climbing people). The updated face is top tier, but maybe go back to that classic helmet and slightly alter it to make it look sharper and cleaner. The black helmet is amazing. I love it. I have a dribbble! Thank you jaha32! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted September 7, 2017 Author Share Posted September 7, 2017 On 9/6/2017 at 8:39 AM, Htown1141 said: A few things: Miami is fine. Just fine. The block numbers are a strange contrast with the otherwise modern set, and it can work, I'm just not feelin' it too much. I do like the M you made. Maybe add a nameplate and see if you can come up with a font that suits the set more, maybe even the current font. The Chargers aren't really my cup of tea. I like the concept, but leave the yoke color to the yoke, otherwise it looks just kinda weird. Maybe take off the full wordmark, just leave "CHARGERS" and then I think the set is vastly improved. Numbers on the helmets are also fine, and I am glad you matched the jersey numbers with the helmet numbers. The Jets are, well, interesting.(?) That's a lot of black, dude. Take off the shoulder numbers, sir and I think it looks a lot better. Maybe make a pants stripe that is similar to the shoulder stripe and I think it could be one of the better Jets concepts out there. Vanilla. Mother. Whale. This should not be an athletic font. It looks good, sure, but should it REALLY be on a classic uniform like the Colts? No. Pick a simpler but still semi-modern font (IDK any, but I'm sure out of the both us, we've stockpiled at least 250 fonts. One's gotta work.) then it becomes perfect. For the Rams, certain double outlines need to die. This is one of them. I love the creativity with the Saints. Minimize the size of the Fleur de lis and that one is easily my favorite one you've made so far. I love the Raiders logo, but I don't think it should have an updated helmet. It reminds me of a military helmet or like one of those climbing people's helmets (yes, climbing people). The updated face is top tier, but maybe go back to that classic helmet and slightly alter it to make it look sharper and cleaner. The black helmet is amazing. I love it. Exactly the comment I needed I'll try to get stuff fixed.Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted November 23, 2017 Author Share Posted November 23, 2017 Little fixes on the dolphins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krz Posted November 24, 2017 Share Posted November 24, 2017 I think the helmet would look so much better if you used the stripes on the pants on the helmet, I just think that the triangle stripe ruins the uniform. However I love the sleeves and numbers Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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