P.I.L.L. Posted September 11, 2017 Share Posted September 11, 2017 updated 07/03/18 updated uni set + comparison to past and present Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted September 11, 2017 Author Share Posted September 11, 2017 9 /16/17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted March 17, 2018 Author Share Posted March 17, 2018 ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flames1fan Posted March 18, 2018 Share Posted March 18, 2018 stop posting the same thing twice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krz Posted March 18, 2018 Share Posted March 18, 2018 Well that’s not the most beautiful concept I’ve ever seen, good job making it unique though. Maybe use a different template? Right now it’s giving me a rejected 90s concept vibe. Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted March 19, 2018 Author Share Posted March 19, 2018 Thank you for the C.C. What template do you suggest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krz Posted March 19, 2018 Share Posted March 19, 2018 Well there is some great stuff in here. It’s really your choice but some templates just make the concept worse automatically so choose wisely Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted March 19, 2018 Author Share Posted March 19, 2018 Yeah, guess just being stubborn with jersey design experiments has always been my achilles heal, among other things... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted April 8, 2018 Author Share Posted April 8, 2018 updated 4/8/18 : Overhaul to Puck-Engine , angled downward adjusted overall shape of plane ~ tightened line thickness and flow congruence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBTV Posted April 8, 2018 Share Posted April 8, 2018 It's not worth providing feedback unless you use a template that is closer to an actual hockey sweater. There's literally dozens floating around for free. Your templates are cartoony and it's not possible to accurately see how your logos would look if sized/positioned properly on a proper sweater. You were literally given the exact same feedback years and years ago, but refuse to do anything with the advice you're given. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woody86 Posted April 8, 2018 Share Posted April 8, 2018 I second the above opinion. It seems that your projects are posted on these boards with the intention of it being a "victory lap." In my experience on these boards and in life, growth happens when you're willing to listen to the feedback given you. It may be hard to try something new (like a new template), but the harder road is ever the more rewarding one. While some commenters might dislike concepts, I generally believe that people on here are trying to help you become better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted April 10, 2018 Author Share Posted April 10, 2018 updated 4/9/18 : New Template + further refinement of plane / puck engine On 4/8/2018 at 2:46 PM, woody86 said: I second the above opinion. It seems that your projects are posted on these boards with the intention of it being a "victory lap." In my experience on these boards and in life, growth happens when you're willing to listen to the feedback given you. It may be hard to try something new (like a new template), but the harder road is ever the more rewarding one. While some commenters might dislike concepts, I generally believe that people on here are trying to help you become better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krz Posted April 10, 2018 Share Posted April 10, 2018 Is that the same template with a picture of a hockey rink behind it? Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted April 10, 2018 Share Posted April 10, 2018 The weird shading on your template doesn't help you; drop it. It makes no sense for the ends of the jerseys to be connected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted April 12, 2018 Author Share Posted April 12, 2018 updated 4/11/18 : adjusted grey outline on plane / lessened shading... will likely relent to a standard template. Just having fun with the challenge of creating something entirely new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted April 16, 2018 Author Share Posted April 16, 2018 updated 4/16/18 : edited streak from puck-jet, angle adjustments + uniform colors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jbadger9 Posted April 16, 2018 Share Posted April 16, 2018 Why are the shoulder patches off the jersey? Also I think a better template would really help make the jerseys look better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted April 22, 2018 Author Share Posted April 22, 2018 updated 4/22/18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted July 4, 2018 Author Share Posted July 4, 2018 updated 07/03/18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krz Posted July 5, 2018 Share Posted July 5, 2018 Honestly, I’m not noticing any changes. Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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