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I have started to redesign the logo for my local football team and although I'm pretty happy with the design, I'd thought I'd post it on the board for feedback as everyone has been very helpful in the past. The logo is a little different style-wise to my usual designs, so I am having a lot of problems getting it just right. The top of the badge is an interpretation of the gates to Victoria Park so really want to keep that in some form (and the panther obviously) but getting the rest to fit is causing a problem. Any help would be much appreciated!

 

 

 

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Try the logo without the tooth, or turn it into a scowl. It looks weird that it's hanging out of the mouth. Other than that, it looks good!

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I also say get rid of the tooth and close the mouth, or add more, smaller teeth to the current mouth.

 

Maybe get rid of the small black piece under the eye?

 

And I think you should have pieces of the gate at the bottom left and right of the shield.

 

Really enjoy this design.

 

 

 

 

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On 04/02/2018 at 11:42 AM, C-Squared said:

It is objectively well-designed, but feels a smidge ornate for a high school sports logo.

 

I totally understand where you are coming from, I think this is the problem with the overall design. Below are the gates to Victoria Park (where the Panthers play) which was my main inspiration for the badge. 

 

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I've worked on the panther a little bit taking in peoples feedback. I'm much happier with the panther with the open mouth, but I still dont think the rest of the badge works together. Any suggestions to help the ornate style of the badge fit with the aggressive panther?

 

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I'm not a huge fan of that gradient. Especially for a high school sports team, that detail will get lost at a lower scale. One other nitpick I have is that the "Victoria park" should fit in between the P and S in Panthers. It will make the wordmark feel more cohesive and it can take up less space and put more focus on the panther and the design on the top.

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I really like that. I think the circular shape works a lot better than the shield from before. The pattern from the park's fence gate is worked in really well. Awesome work, man!

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