JCRGraphix Posted July 26, 2018 Author Share Posted July 26, 2018 13 hours ago, CaptainKirkMN said: Wasn't the Trident also an American nuclear sub that was stationed in Turkey as a deterrent against the USSR? Loose lips sink ships! Speaking of military might, the next team gets its name from the Mikoyan-Gurevich factory in Moscow which produces the MiG jets that have been giving us so many troubles... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 28, 2018 Author Share Posted July 28, 2018 Any feedback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted July 28, 2018 Share Posted July 28, 2018 21 minutes ago, JCRGraphix said: Any feedback? Not digging the logo so much on this one. The jet engine trail is a bit too long and prominent and stretches out a bit far. The jerseys are nice. Maybe pro-American though, with the red, white and blue? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted July 28, 2018 Share Posted July 28, 2018 29 minutes ago, JCRGraphix said: Any feedback? Maybe replace the blue with a color more Russian friendly, because it looks too much like the USA. BTW, are you gonna continue that fictional hockey league you were working on a while back? The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 28, 2018 Author Share Posted July 28, 2018 Thanks for the feedback. That's the best part of this site! I might get back to that other project. Business has been wild recently. Now, without further ado, we have another team... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted July 28, 2018 Share Posted July 28, 2018 7 minutes ago, JCRGraphix said: Thanks for the feedback. That's the best part of this site! I might get back to that other project. Business has been wild recently. Now, without further ado, we have another team... Very nice. Also, I really miss that Aussie Rules NFL that you were working too. The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted July 28, 2018 Share Posted July 28, 2018 Really like Prague. The blue jersey could maybe use a little more red though—it’s a bit like a Finland jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vtgco Posted July 28, 2018 Share Posted July 28, 2018 I've been following this series closely! Here are some thoughts. 33 minutes ago, appleclock said: Really like Prague. The blue jersey could maybe use a little more red though—it’s a bit like a Finland jersey. I don't know, I kinda like the different color balances of the two different jerseys. It provides the team with some character! Speaking of differently-colored uniforms, I love the Stags' jersey set! That's what the LA Kings' uniforms should look like. Only complaint there is that they should have a stag silhouette as a shoulder patch. Kiev's logo and colors are very pretty, even if it wouldn't fly in Soviet-controlled Ukraine. I'd maybe isolate the hammer for Leningrad, because it kinda looks like a Soviet National Team with the full hammer and sickle. I think Moscow would look better if the logo was just the plane, no contrail. I'm curious why all of Europe and Asia are included on your big map... Is this an alternate timeline? All around amazing work and what a fun theme! Look forward to more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoE38_Concepts Posted July 28, 2018 Share Posted July 28, 2018 Love this series. Execution is fantastic for all of them. Are there going to be any Yugoslavian teams? @noe38concepts (Instagram - Twitter) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCRGraphix Posted July 29, 2018 Author Share Posted July 29, 2018 My source smuggled the final team across the border... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vtgco Posted July 29, 2018 Share Posted July 29, 2018 I'd consider getting rid of the white on the green jersey, but otherwise Vilnius looks pretty great! Fun color scheme! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BurdBranding Posted July 29, 2018 Share Posted July 29, 2018 The Iron Wolves are my favorite look. This was a refreshing series! I really really hope you go back to the fictional league series mentioned earlier, your leagues and story is amazing. I have your Pan-American series bookmarked on my phone and have read it multiple times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steelman Posted July 30, 2018 Share Posted July 30, 2018 Jordan, massive props on the creativity here! I always enjoy your work. You definitely killed this presentation. Fictional Baseball Series: Torland Star League Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted July 30, 2018 Share Posted July 30, 2018 Very nice so far. Keep it up! The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hecticbro Posted August 1, 2018 Share Posted August 1, 2018 This is awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainKirkMN Posted August 2, 2018 Share Posted August 2, 2018 Holy cow, Vilnius is cool! We hadn't seen a lot of green or yellow yet, so seeing the colors of the Lithuanian flag really makes the Wolves stand out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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