Lumbergh Posted August 18, 2018 Share Posted August 18, 2018 Been working on a Browns concept logo. Here is the primary version, with a few variations. Please give me feedback so I can figure out where to go next. I'll post the secondary soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vtgco Posted August 18, 2018 Share Posted August 18, 2018 So far I'm liking B the best. The idea's there, but something feels a bit off about all of them.  If I were you, I'd consider a version where the letters don't extend all the way to the top and bottom. I'd also make the letters a lot thicker, maybe into more of a block font style. Also, maybe give it a double outline, white then orange, to match the famous helmet stripe.  Here's a quick sketch of what I mean:  Still, you're pretty close, and it'll just take some tweaking. I look forward to the secondary! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalCookie Posted August 18, 2018 Share Posted August 18, 2018 I like E the best out of those options. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pHiL Kizer Posted August 18, 2018 Share Posted August 18, 2018 Take E and make the horizontal laces white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appleclock Posted August 18, 2018 Share Posted August 18, 2018 I’d make the C and B more symmetrical. Think Warner Bros. logo. Forget about the vertical B line being the center line... the B overpowers the C too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyersfan Posted August 18, 2018 Share Posted August 18, 2018 It’s a great idea, I like what you have but the letters should be bolder. I think that would really help it. As said above, great idea, it’s pretty close to being awesome.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitz Posted August 19, 2018 Share Posted August 19, 2018 Love 'A' - the subtlty of the CB is the best part of the Whole concept imo.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted August 20, 2018 Share Posted August 20, 2018 A, with vtgco's suggestion of thickening the letters significantly.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumbergh Posted August 20, 2018 Author Share Posted August 20, 2018 I made the "CB" more symmetrical and thicker, and wove the laces in between with brown lines dropped at the bottoms for contrast. Here is a look at the other logo I'm working on. Very rough, but it's basically a "Cb" in the shape of a helmet. The "C" is formed by the outline of the shell and with the helmet stripe. The "b" is supposed to work as the face mask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest darkpiranha Posted August 21, 2018 Share Posted August 21, 2018 LOVE your new football.  I'm curious what it would look like with the letters even thicker, like maybe 33% thicker. The main thing you'd lose is the laces being the same width as the two letter edges, but I think it would still work.   Not feeling the helmet at all. My brain alternates between seeing two different things. One is a coffee cup, the second is a fruit of some kind, with the b looking like a sad stem and leaf that's fallen over and is drooping on the side now.  The football logo is strong, and I'd definitely stick with that.  Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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