72freebie Posted September 20, 2018 Share Posted September 20, 2018 This is a rebrand concept for the Prince Albert Raiders of the Western Hockey League. I think that their logo set could up an update so I went ahead and did one. I went back to the pirate theme similar to what they had in the 2000's but I combined it with their current sword identity to create a combination of eras. I currently have 2 options for the primary logo and I need some hel picking the better one for the front of the jerseys. Option 1 has the wordmark above the pirate head and crossed swords Option 2 has no wordmark and makes the swords more prominent behind the head Here is the shoulder logo which I am quite happy with as of now. Just an R with the sword piercing through it And here is a couple of jersey options. I want to know two things from you guys: which logo looks better on the front, and if the jersey with the hem design or side panels is better. I'm hoping to hear some feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nate.sweitz Posted September 20, 2018 Share Posted September 20, 2018 This is a beautiful concept. The sword logo is great, and the jerseys are tremendous. My personal favorite sweater is the top right. Just nitpicking at this point, but I think the primary pirate head could use a little tweaking. It's a little on the cartoony side. I think if you made the face a little slimmer and gave it a little more definition (i.e. extending the cheekbones, maybe some shadows) it would go a long way. Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LogoMark Posted September 20, 2018 Share Posted September 20, 2018 This looks awesome, my only small tweak would be the eyes are a little far apart and maybe a little small, otherwise this is killer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrJack Posted September 21, 2018 Share Posted September 21, 2018 Looks good! The jerseys, logos, and colors all work great together. I'm a bigger fan of "Option 2" because the face and swords are rendered nicely and the wordmark takes away from it a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vtgco Posted September 21, 2018 Share Posted September 21, 2018 I'm with @nate.sweitz and @LogoMarkabout the pirate's head. Option 2 looks better; it's less busy than 1, and I think it works better on the jerseys. Logo patch looks great; an improvement from the current logo's basic idea! The jerseys are a bit out there but the second option's cool. I'd prefer it if you could emphasize green more and reduce gold to an accent color. Needs a couple edits, but overall a nice update to the Raiders' look! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted October 12, 2018 Author Share Posted October 12, 2018 Here is an update to the Concept I have updated the logo in a few ways. I changed some of the angles on the letters to ill space better. I made the mouth bigger on the pirates so that it is more proportional and the mustache is closer to the nose. I went with jersey option number 2 and applied the new logo to it. I would still like bit more feedback as well as more opinions on what logo should be on the front because I am honestly 50/50 on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stumpygremlin Posted October 13, 2018 Share Posted October 13, 2018 Love this. You should do a wordmark-only logo as well. What font did you use? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LogoMark Posted October 15, 2018 Share Posted October 15, 2018 This is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted December 5, 2018 Author Share Posted December 5, 2018 Hey Guys. I never did post the final update to this concept. I updated the primary logo as well as made a new jersey design. The concept is currently a finalist in the Prince Albert Raiders jersey contest and it will be worn in a real game if it wins. If you have a minute, please follow the following link http://raiderhockey.com/jerseycontest and vote for my design if you think it deserves to be worn in a real game. You can vote once per day so if you really like it, make sure to vote daily. Thank you. new primary logo new jersey design Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted December 6, 2018 Share Posted December 6, 2018 I went to the link and couldn't see how to vote. Is it perhaps blocked outside of Canada? It's absurd you're not in first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted December 6, 2018 Share Posted December 6, 2018 18 minutes ago, Whittier S said: I went to the link and couldn't see how to vote. Is it perhaps blocked outside of Canada? It's absurd you're not in first. There's a small poll at the bottom of the page. I almost missed it myself. And it's awfully tough for the average person to vote against a hand-drawn concept clearly done by a kid. Tugs at the heartstrings and all that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chcarlson23 Posted December 6, 2018 Share Posted December 6, 2018 While Brooks should be in first place, the hand-drawn one isn't terrible. It'll at least look good on the ice... Unlike the 4th option, yikes that's bad. The update on your jersey is fantastic! Side panels are usually not a good choice, so switching to angled striping was a really good move. "And those who know Your Name put their trust in You, for You, O Lord, have not forsaken those who seek You." Psalms 9:10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted December 6, 2018 Share Posted December 6, 2018 7 hours ago, officeglenn said: There's a small poll at the bottom of the page. I almost missed it myself. And it's awfully tough for the average person to vote against a hand-drawn concept clearly done by a kid. Tugs at the heartstrings and all that. I see the poll but I don't see anything to click for a vote. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted December 7, 2018 Author Share Posted December 7, 2018 2 hours ago, Whittier S said: I see the poll but I don't see anything to click for a vote. Try refreshing the page, that usually works for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted December 8, 2018 Share Posted December 8, 2018 Finally got it to work, and voted. Hoping you get it. Though, now that I think about it, that kid's monogram isn't half-bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72freebie Posted December 22, 2018 Author Share Posted December 22, 2018 So just a little bit of an update on the contest. My design has gotten all the way back up to the top and is now tied for the lead! thank you everyone who has voted and has made this possible. That being said, if you still think my design deserves to win, then go to the following link and keep voting every day f you think that my design should be worn in a real game. CONTEST LINK I also did up a matching white jersey concept just to see what it would look like if the Raiders somehow adapted this as their full time look. Thank you for all of the support everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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