Jeffery Posted January 3, 2019 Share Posted January 3, 2019 Here is my concept for a secondary Arizona Cardinals logo, though it could just be a generic Arizona Logo. I am trying to incorporate an AZ in the copper star from the flag, but it just doesn't quite look right. I would really appreciate feedback on how to make the logo look more professional or clean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_DietDrPepper_ Posted January 3, 2019 Share Posted January 3, 2019 The Z poking out of the A and how its not even is really bothering, i think that would be the first fix Follow the NFA, and My Baseball League here: https://ahsports.boardhost.com/index.php Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffery Posted January 3, 2019 Author Share Posted January 3, 2019 Thanks for the feedback. I evened it out and added a border. What do you think? /img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffery Posted January 8, 2019 Author Share Posted January 8, 2019 Cleaned up the design a bit (updated last post). Take another look and let me know what you think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoE38_Concepts Posted January 8, 2019 Share Posted January 8, 2019 The two outer branches of the star are looking a little empty. Try seeing what you can do with that. Making the ends of the A pointed would also make the design more consistent. You've got a good start here. @noe38concepts (Instagram - Twitter) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_DietDrPepper_ Posted January 8, 2019 Share Posted January 8, 2019 Try making the A part of the outline in the star, if that makes sense. Follow the NFA, and My Baseball League here: https://ahsports.boardhost.com/index.php Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffery Posted January 9, 2019 Author Share Posted January 9, 2019 Thanks for the feedback! I agree the points on the ends of the A look good. I tried the other suggestions as well. There's certainly room for improvement in my designs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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