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Jr Smith//Who Said You Need Wings To Fly


Lefty7

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you need to work on your clipping mask skills....otherwise, not too bad.

the kerning on "SMITH" should have been cleaned up a bit, and i'm not sure what the blurry blue thing is supposed to be. a vaporized defender, perhaps? dunno.

i hope you wanted a critique.

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I echo what Joel said, but I'll ad a few things?

There should be a question mark after "Fly", unless it's J.R. Smith, who said "you need wings to fly".

I'm not sure where you got your picture from, but I'm guessing you scanned it in, because I can read backwards text on Smith's left leg.

The Hornets logo is too blurred to be recognized (except by me, obviously :P). I think you'd be better off reducing the opacity of it rather than blurring it.

Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016

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