kingssss Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 Here is an idea that i had for the Jays. I wanted to add more red into the logo without them becoming the "red" jays. I also made the alt jerseys blue instead of the black that they have. Im not too sure about some things. Much C&C please, and any suggestions to improve them.Here they are:Primary LogoHome UniRoad UniHome Alt UniRoad Alt Uni Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike2025 Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 I'm not really a big fan of having the Red on that logo, doesn't seem to go well with it. Maybe if it were a darker shade of Red, I don't know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zer0dotcom Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 Pretty cool. Some suggestions:- on the grey road, use a slightly darker red to add less contrast- on the blue alts, use more white to helkp highlight the logo and the red stripes. Having it on the logo, but not on the stripes doesn't quite fit. even just on hte sleeves having a touch would make it seem more wholeThe way you incorporated red into the logo and home uniform are very well done. You managed to add red while not taking away from the rest of the colours (except black, but I don't think many people will miss it) or having to alter the dsign itself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bulldogbarks55 Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 First, the black cap crowns defeat the purpose of taking black out of the uniforms. And the red/blue striping on the uniforms says "'70s Expos." You need more white outline on the blue alternate. Your way the lettering won't show up. Back to the drawing board. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 Very nice concepts. I prefer a bit less red, almost makes them look like the Rangers. Good job. Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JH42XCC Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 Nice!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brennus Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 No red, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sscrunner06 Posted July 22, 2005 Share Posted July 22, 2005 Good idea, but it just doesn't go with this logo. In fact, I don't think there is too much that COULD fix this logo. Good work though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~boshalladay~ Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 From a diehard Jays fan It Sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sscrunner06 Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 You know, if you're going to make a stupid comment like that, you're better off not posting anything at all. I may not like everyone's concepts, but I appreciate the time and effort they put into it. Next time why don't you try to be a little more constructive then just saying "it sucks." Put a little thought into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsfan39 Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 the shade of red you used is a little too bright for my tastes. try diming the contrast a little. on the road uni it wouldnt hurt to make "toronto" a little bigger. and im not digging the alt with blue with red piping. try white instead. the logo's use of red really takes my eyes off the logo itself. my eyes are really drawn to the red parts and the how thing looks like it doesnt belong. the hat doesnt do it for me either the red outline really brings it down. nice idea, but it needs to be tweaked to be really good.o and wheres the graphite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~boshalladay~ Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 You know, if you're going to make a stupid comment like that, you're better off not posting anything at all. I may not like everyone's concepts, but I appreciate the time and effort they put into it. Next time why don't you try to be a little more constructive then just saying "it sucks." Put a little thought into it. bleep off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsfan39 Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 You know, if you're going to make a stupid comment like that, you're better off not posting anything at all. I may not like everyone's concepts, but I appreciate the time and effort they put into it. Next time why don't you try to be a little more constructive then just saying "it sucks." Put a little thought into it. bleep off shut up n00bie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Braden Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 You know, if you're going to make a stupid comment like that, you're better off not posting anything at all. I may not like everyone's concepts, but I appreciate the time and effort they put into it. Next time why don't you try to be a little more constructive then just saying "it sucks." Put a little thought into it. It's no worse than a " :notworthy: " thread... but your point is right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMU Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 The red looks WAY out of place. I love the logos that the Blue Jays use, just not the colors. I'd prefer to see more blue added here and there as opposed to another color being brought in to complicate everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davey Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 You know, if you're going to make a stupid comment like that, you're better off not posting anything at all. I may not like everyone's concepts, but I appreciate the time and effort they put into it. Next time why don't you try to be a little more constructive then just saying "it sucks." Put a little thought into it. It's no worse than a " " thread... but your point is right. I agree to. I guy who has only posted 9 post, and just joined, last week should not be talking all negative. He tryed , and put some thouhgt into, I like teh red, but ther is alittle bit too much. I give you repect for doing the conept on the blue jays, and i hope you contiued doing your best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moser316 Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 The color palette you're using can work (look at DePaul's logos for an example), but for some reason, the red seems way too forced here. Nice try, though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 Red looks pink, blue too "babyish" imo. "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suigi Posted July 23, 2005 Share Posted July 23, 2005 Nonononono.This just does not work at all.At least, IMO it doesn't. Super Wario Comix!Iron Crossover IX Contender (Tied for 6th)Iron Crossover Halloween Contender (Tied for Bronze) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lopernv Posted July 24, 2005 Share Posted July 24, 2005 From a diehard Jays fan It Sucks Dude shutup. You have no friends. Diehard Jays fan, eh?I hope you die hard for being such an idiot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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