jake122683 Posted September 7, 2005 Share Posted September 7, 2005 horrible logo dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted September 7, 2005 Author Share Posted September 7, 2005 Thanks for the constructive critisism, ya jerk. Your stuff...outstanding, Im sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 Bump for update....C&C...yummy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 Bump: for the morning rush. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 No opinions or criticisms!?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltravisjr Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 No opinions or criticisms!?! Probably no criticisms because there isn't much to criticise here .All I can say is that it looks like the logo is just floating above the wordmark and the city name is floating below it. If they could be tied together somewhow I think it would be perfect.LT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuddyLane Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 I think it's an original logo. I don't like it. Don't get upset. I just think it is missing something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 I think it's an original logo. I don't like it. Don't get upset. I just think it is missing something. No, thats good and it kinda helps....unlike "horrible logo dude". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 Right now it's very flat, very two-dimensional. Some simple highlights and/or shadows would really help. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
P.I.L.L. Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 top one, (golden eye) is the best... sleek / classy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted September 8, 2005 Author Share Posted September 8, 2005 A little highlight under the chin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted September 9, 2005 Author Share Posted September 9, 2005 I made the white outline on the bird thicker and I made the head swoop more to give it more movement and this one has the yellow eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted September 9, 2005 Author Share Posted September 9, 2005 These are the basic three designs I used as style examples...I didnt think mine popped enough so I put in the yellow eye.What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuddyLane Posted September 9, 2005 Share Posted September 9, 2005 There is still something missing. Try to tweak the beak some. I think that might help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltravisjr Posted September 9, 2005 Share Posted September 9, 2005 This is minor, but the outline from the nect to the back of the head is a straight segment right now. I would consider changing it into a curved segment like the rest of the outline. Also, the bird is not quite centered over the wordmark now. Again, very minor. Also, I can't quite place what needs tweaking on the beak, but I think there is something that can be done. I don't know, maybe the dividing line between the upper and lower beak should line up with the point of the gray "V" shape above it (assuming both are meant to separate the upper and lower beak). Otherwise I honestlly don't have a problem with this design.LT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted September 13, 2005 Author Share Posted September 13, 2005 bump update....rounder neck bottom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted September 13, 2005 Share Posted September 13, 2005 Gettin closer, try getting rid of a color (the grey), it will increase contrast and flexibility of the logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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