CFSize24 Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 After the doing my team I decided I would try my hat at concepts for the 16 team league I commish. Here is my effort for the Las Vegas Franchise. I tried the secondary logo on the helmet and just didnt care for the feel so I went with the LV on it. The team owner loved it, but there is a bit tougher crowd around here so tell me what you think, thanks. Formula GPCenterField 22 pts #7 Coca-Cola Giancarlo Fisichella 4pts#8 Coca-Cola Lewis Hamilton 18ptsTRACCenterField Motorsports#5 Sony Kyle Busch#8 Gatorade Kurt Busch#9 Sirius David Ragan/Ricky Rudd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclopsis Joe Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 Could you pick one or two fonts from the 4-5 you used?That's my only criticism. I don't speak for democrats, democrats don't speak for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahub Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 I like the design a lot, but I'm not really digging the color scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 you've got an amazing secondary logo but a weak primary and wordmark (esp. wordmark) - why not make the primary in the style of the secondary? and i agree - unify the font scheme. narrow it down to one or two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grish Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 I would make the Secondary as the main logo... or mix some in some of the 2nd to the prime....wordmark is nice too. "Try not to have a good time ... This is supposed to be educational."- Charles Schulz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 I love the idea, and it's looking pretty good.2 thoughts:1. The logos all have "Western" themed fonts. So why the sleek, modern uniform numbers/letters? While I don't think that "Western" numbering would look anything but hokey, there is too much of a disconnect from a design standpoint for these to look like they relate to one another. The 49ers used to have a "Western" font for the wordmark, but used basic block numerals and letters.2. Change the gold (yellow) to Vegas gold (metallic). I love the red/black theme (think of the 4 suits in a deck of cards, the colors of a roulette wheel...). But the yellow gold makes me think more of Germany or Belgium than Vegas.Otherwise, bravo. Good stuff! "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PackerBadger Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 These are, I must say, perfect colors for a Vegas team. (Metallic gold would work in place of the yellow gold too.) I'm not in love with the Titans look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 i love that secondary logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MHraven626 Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 ok primary, amazing secondary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LucaMaz3 Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 great primary and secondary, but the wordmark and color scheme could use a little tweak. you could go with a darker red and metallic gold Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CFSize24 Posted October 7, 2005 Author Share Posted October 7, 2005 Thanks for all of the comments and suggestions, I tweaked the gold somewhat in the update. I completely overhauled the wordmark and added to the primary. I still am uncertain about the helmet. I plan on updating the unis still, just havent gotten to them yet. Formula GPCenterField 22 pts #7 Coca-Cola Giancarlo Fisichella 4pts#8 Coca-Cola Lewis Hamilton 18ptsTRACCenterField Motorsports#5 Sony Kyle Busch#8 Gatorade Kurt Busch#9 Sirius David Ragan/Ricky Rudd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted October 8, 2005 Share Posted October 8, 2005 I loved the first rendition, and this is an improvement. Great work. I don't have much to say regarding criticism. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted October 8, 2005 Share Posted October 8, 2005 Like the revision, with one exception.Not sure about the gold spade on a gold helmet. The outline of the spade is subtle and based mostly on the black shadow; with such thin lines framing the spade, it's bound to get lost on the helmet if it's the same color as the helmet.Otherwise, nice upgrades! "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CFSize24 Posted October 8, 2005 Author Share Posted October 8, 2005 A few more tweaks and jerseys. Formula GPCenterField 22 pts #7 Coca-Cola Giancarlo Fisichella 4pts#8 Coca-Cola Lewis Hamilton 18ptsTRACCenterField Motorsports#5 Sony Kyle Busch#8 Gatorade Kurt Busch#9 Sirius David Ragan/Ricky Rudd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted October 9, 2005 Share Posted October 9, 2005 very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ahub Posted October 9, 2005 Share Posted October 9, 2005 I like the updates a lot. The new helmet logo is very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tj4eck Posted October 9, 2005 Share Posted October 9, 2005 love ya concepts !!!!!!i actually "borrowed" your jerseys and added gamble instead of "aces" for my fantasy team (the Vegas Gamble) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted October 9, 2005 Share Posted October 9, 2005 Something just hit me about the concept. Why not make the spade black? In a deck of cards, spades are neither white (as in your primary) or gold (as on your helmet). I don't know what that would do to the lettering outline, or the drop shadow on the spade. But maybe a black spade (red shadow? white outline on red letters?) would look more "correct"...Otherwise, I like these a lot. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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