gordie_delini Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 I'm very happy with this one, so let me know what you think, and i can make any changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclopsis Joe Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 Lighten the elephant and the wordmark and you got a winner. I don't speak for democrats, democrats don't speak for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lucky Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 Needs white. I'd start with "PHILADELPHIA" And maybe a lighter color in between the shield and its border. Yeah do that. Do exactly THAT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scooter13 Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 I think you need to lighten the gold a bit. But other then that, I think it's fantastic. Detroit Dragons - 2010 ULL Gait Cup ChampionsDetroit Cougars - 2010 and 2011 WAFA Wills Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted October 6, 2005 Author Share Posted October 6, 2005 white border/philadelphialighter gold - only slightly lighter, but lighter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenMan Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 Nice. Did you draw the elephant yourself? Very impressive. Does it concern you that the font you chose is so similar to the NFL's Titans, or is that kinda the idea? I'd consider filling in the area behind the top right part of the letter S with gold so that area isn't quite as busy, and maybe do the same with the notched areas above the N. I know they add a little extra shape, but they are so shallow they almost look like an oversight rather than a design element. Just a thought... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted October 6, 2005 Author Share Posted October 6, 2005 Nice. Did you draw the elephant yourself? Very impressive. Does it concern you that the font you chose is so similar to the NFL's Titans, or is that kinda the idea? I'd consider filling in the area behind the top right part of the letter S with gold so that area isn't quite as busy, and maybe do the same with the notched areas above the N. I know they add a little extra shape, but they are so shallow they almost look like an oversight rather than a design element. Just a thought... i did draw the elephant myself in illustrator - and the font i chose is called vahika - i didn't intend it to look so much like the NFL titans script, but i dont mind that similarity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scooter13 Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 lighter gold - only slightly lighter, but lighter It is slight, but it does make a difference in my eyes. To me that is one sharp logo. I like the addition of the white as well. It actually makes the white slashes on the elephant stand out more, which makes the elephant stand out more. Very nice job. Detroit Dragons - 2010 ULL Gait Cup ChampionsDetroit Cougars - 2010 and 2011 WAFA Wills Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted October 6, 2005 Author Share Posted October 6, 2005 version #4 - changed the highlights on the elephant and text from pale sky blue to white Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted October 6, 2005 Author Share Posted October 6, 2005 version #5 - not sure if i like this as much, but what do you all think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lost_limey Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 I think version 4 was best, though I'd lighten the blue a minute amount, it looks almost black on my screen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenMan Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 I think version 4 was best, though I'd lighten the blue a minute amount, it looks almost black on my screen.Agreed on both counts. Beyond that my only concern is how Phila would read when the logo is run small. I suppose it could just drop off? Regardless, it looks sharp. How would the elephant look in a light tint of the gold? In version 5 the stroke pinches the letter D so I think you might need to scale down ever so slightly if you outline in a color other than red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kess Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 I, too, like #4 the best...but I think the dark blue looks great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 #4 is definately the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 Were it me...I'd move the wordmark out of the shield. It looks very off-balance and forced in. Place the wordmark below the shield, shorten it up a bit, keep the white elephant in there as the focal point (and, in fact, make it bigger), and I think you'd be set.If you want to keep the ball as well, I'm picturing a kindof cool way to set it apart, but I'm not sure i can describe it very well in words. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sean69 Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 pink elephant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krownjewelz44 Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 I'm really feeling #4. I'd get take the outline down just a little and would be straight. As always good work.SC Taking the Big 12 Title!The AFC North is ours!!!The Best of the Best!!Home of Champions......Capital High Cougars.....We Gets Busy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumbergh Posted October 6, 2005 Share Posted October 6, 2005 if it were me, i'd go w/ 5, stands out better and is alot more attractive and visible to the eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted October 7, 2005 Author Share Posted October 7, 2005 not too sure about #6 - what do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted October 7, 2005 Share Posted October 7, 2005 Well, seeing as though i'm the owner of the team... I go away to ref a football game, and came back floored. Those are phoenominal. I really, really like #4, although I agree with M&L that the white logo and letters stand out more in #5.I'll make up my mind in the next day or so. In any event, thank you, thank you, thank you Gordie, you are the man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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