Rod_Thompson Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 Came up with a more creative logo for the Redbirds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Audiodrama Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 Very, very nice execution. I have one problem that popped out at me immediately after seeing it -- is the bird's eye supposed to have a pupil, or no? To me, it could look like a plain eye with no pupil, or it could look like the eye is looking behind the bird to his left, almost. Which were you going for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 This is pretty sweet. Though, the top half of the beak looks to be a lot bigger and kind of hanging over the sides of the bottom half. I know it's bit "higher" than the bottom, but I think they're supposed to be about the same width where they meet. Other than that, top notch job. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
js ° Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 wow ... really nice work here. this probably the fiercest cardinal i've ever seen, and you pull it off without making it the least bit cartoony (ie. goofy gritting teeth on animals that don't even have teeth). great job. ◬☰ ⏣ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 Fantastic work. When I first saw it I saw the pupil as looking backward. When Unwind made his comment, I saw it the other way. Personally I think that makes it even better. Both look menacing with one looking forward and the other looking backward. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeremyb Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 Looks great. What way is the pupil suppose to be though? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1991 Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 nice, but i would like to see that logo incorporated with the bird statnding on the redbird font like they do with the memphis font. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rod_Thompson Posted July 10, 2007 Author Share Posted July 10, 2007 Thanx. The bird, when I designed it, had no pupil. It is just the white of the eyes that was incorporated. I think that the jpeg is so choppy that it does look like an eye.I changed the beak shadow to blue and added to the eye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cooleyvol Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 The bottom beak doesnt look right that red color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korbyn Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 Looks real good. For some reason though the blue on the beak bugs me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drevel Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 Looking good. Thats one pissed RedBird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Am A Flaming Douche Bag Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 I love it. Thats a mean looking bird! Its a sharp logo though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
myartsaywhat Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 Looks great!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted July 10, 2007 Share Posted July 10, 2007 Wow! That is so much better than the batter they have now, fantastic job! I also like the colors, similar to the Cards, yet not copying all the way. Again, fantastic job! Any plans on some uniforms to go along with? Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leggman01 Posted July 11, 2007 Share Posted July 11, 2007 really nice...a couple of things i'd change...the eye still looks a little funky...it needs more definition and it seems as though the "pupil" triangle should be coming from the top rather than the bottom - i'm not feeling the patch of blue behind the eye...why is it there?...i feel like that should be red - i don't really like the large expanse of white space at the bottom and the way the logo "connects" to the wordmark...i think if you fixed that alone, it would improve this logo tremendously...again, really nice work, though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted July 11, 2007 Share Posted July 11, 2007 and the way the logo "connects" to the wordmark...i think if you fixed that alone, it would improve this logo tremendouslyI feel the same way. The chin of the bird just buries itself into the wordmark and gets murky. That can work ok if the chin detail was simple, but I don't think you are looking to do that. I think some separation or flipped and tucked in. I dunno. I would want to play with that. Someone might knock it for having too much of a hawk beak. I like this approach to the Cardinal though. Definitely says something. and the way the logo "connects" to the wordmark...i think if you fixed that alone, it would improve this logo tremendouslyI feel the same way. The chin of the bird just buries itself into the wordmark and gets murky. That can work ok if the chin detail was simple, but I don't think you are looking to do that. I think some separation or flipped and tucked in. I dunno. I would want to play with that. Someone might knock it for having too much of a hawk beak. I like this approach to the Cardinal though. Definitely says something. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rod_Thompson Posted July 11, 2007 Author Share Posted July 11, 2007 the upsidedown pupil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McCall Posted July 11, 2007 Share Posted July 11, 2007 the upsidedown pupil. On the right side of the beak, bring the bottom corner to meet the top corner of the red/underbeak. The left side can be left alone for now. But this should help make it look better, I think. After bringing that point over, see if it looks alright or you may need to kind of round off that the right side.Cuz right now, as it is, it almost looks like he's got kind of a Wilfred Brimley mustache going on with the top half of the beak. https://dribbble.com/MakaioCall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rod_Thompson Posted July 11, 2007 Author Share Posted July 11, 2007 The uniforms to match Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ravenmaster Posted July 12, 2007 Share Posted July 12, 2007 The Home and Away jerseys are nice, but that alt blue has my brain running around in circles. I'm not sure whether to like it or to burn it. The blue is a nice colour, but the shoulder pad style red colours seem to be strangely out of place. And the light blue stripe on the end of the sleeves? Where did that come from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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