CJworks Posted January 11, 2010 Author Share Posted January 11, 2010 Thanks for the comments guys. I appreciate it, since I haven't gotten so many Chuck, you mind pointing out some of those parts that need fixing? Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 Some of the edges where colors meet in the Knights' primary need fixing. Most noticeable problem is in the 's' of the Bandits' script. Also, where the knot in the bandanna on the Bandits' primary is, there is a stray line of orange in the black. These are just the ones I saw. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raz Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 Nice designs.For New Orleans: Crawdads.For New York: Gargoyles.For Detroit: Spiders.For Milwaukee: Stags.For Tennessee: Hounds.For St. Louis: Archers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limerick Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 I like three of the four teams that have been done. The only team that I cannot warm up to is Cleveland. The logo is great, but I just feel that something is missing when it comes to the uniforms. Perhaps diagonal lines similar to what you did for Florida. Here are some for teams:New Orleans: FireNew York: HitmenDetroit: ChargersTennessee: Rhythym St. Louis: ScorpionsMinnesota: BlizzardMilwaukee/Green Bay: Freeze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 11, 2010 Author Share Posted January 11, 2010 Thanks for the comments. Chuck: I tryed to touch up on the logos of the Knights and Bandits, I'll have them uploaded after school.Limerick: I knew something was missing, I just couldn't point it out. I'll update the Bandits later today.And also, thanks for the name suggestions, guys. Keep 'em coming! Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ESTONES6 Posted January 11, 2010 Share Posted January 11, 2010 yeah it kinda looks like the Bandits are just a pallet swap of the Knights. When i hear Bandits i think of a Devil may care, throw caution to wind. The Bandits here just seem too reserved and conservative. SAINT IGNATIUS WILDCATS | CLEVELAND BROWNS | CLEVELAND CAVALIERS | CLEVELAND INDIANS | THE OHIO STATE BUCKEYES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 11, 2010 Author Share Posted January 11, 2010 Ooo. Now that I look back at it they are kind of similar. I'll get back to it ina bit. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 12, 2010 Author Share Posted January 12, 2010 Alright, I updated the Bandits. Make sure you check it out on page 2. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limerick Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 Aw, much better C Jay Z. I just think that adding those gold lines really improves the uniform and takes it out of the mundane. Nice work.Limerick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ESTONES6 Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 yeah i still can't approve of the colors and numbers, but the design is a lot better. breaks it up from the Knights quite nicely.i was thinking for another uniform idea just thin piping around the whole jersey and pants... kinda like the Atlanta Falcons uniforms, just not the feathers on the shoulders. same with the Texas Tech too. SAINT IGNATIUS WILDCATS | CLEVELAND BROWNS | CLEVELAND CAVALIERS | CLEVELAND INDIANS | THE OHIO STATE BUCKEYES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wingz017 Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 New Orleans: Armada, Derricks, OilersNew York: Emporers, MonarchsDetroit: Iron Horses, Devils Tennessee: Swingers, RebelsSt. Louis: Archers, Aeros, RivermenMinnesota: Lakers, Kodiaks, WolverinesMilwaukee: Stags, Harts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 12, 2010 Author Share Posted January 12, 2010 Alright thanks a ton guys. I'll have the Lightning up this weekend if I have time.BTW, since it's been a popular suggestion (and it's really catching on to me), I'm going with the name Rivermen for St.Louis Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JH42XCC Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 My Alternate suggestions for the other New York team would be Generals, Americans, and Dutchmen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 Here are some of my name suggestions:Atlanta TalonsBaltimore AdmiralsBoston ShamrocksBuffalo BeastsChicago SentinelsCincinnati RivermenCleveland BulldogsDenver MountaineersDetroit MechanicsLos Angeles MogulsMilwaukee BaronsMinnesota MaraudersNew Orleans HarlequinsNew York GothamsPhiladelphia BrawlersPhoenix ScorpionsPittsburgh Iron MenSan Francisco SealsSeattle SteelheadsWashington Federals The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 13, 2010 Author Share Posted January 13, 2010 Hey guysI've decided to bump down the New York Lightning a few so I can work with it a little more. With that said, I'll have the Dakota Rhinos up next. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 14, 2010 Author Share Posted January 14, 2010 Here it is guys.#5 Dakota RhinosUp Next: #6 Chicago DragonsThis time around, my goal was to strengthen the logo package, but at the same time keep the same identity. However, the smiling rhino is no longer, it's replaced be the new primary: a charging two-tone rhino head in gray. The 'D' logo has remained, but I got rid of the red from this particular logo, to match the primary's outlining. The script is where I had my trouble, a two-toned 'Rhinos' in gray, which is not final. The entire logo set is still a little off to me with the absence or red, but I think the rhino head looks better on the helmet with a gray outline instead.HomeAwayAlternateThrowback Unis (in chronological order from oldest to newest)1, 2, 3, 4**UPDATED 6-19-10** Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limerick Posted January 14, 2010 Share Posted January 14, 2010 I look forward to this series. The colour scheme looks good and I love the rhino logo. The third uniforms almost have that Houston Texans look, but that's cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 14, 2010 Author Share Posted January 14, 2010 Thanks. I dunno, something about the Rhino looks off to me, though. I can't point it out. Does the mouth look alright? Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgnmrwrw Posted January 14, 2010 Share Posted January 14, 2010 I actually really like the Rhinos. The colors are nice and well incorporated. The logos are pretty nice as well. I think you need to go back and standardize the highlights on the rhino and the line widths, especially the outlines. But I really like the look and semi-cartoony style. The D logo is very nice as a secondary. My only complaint on the uniforms is the big thick white collar, when there is no white in the striping anywhere else (not counting the names and numbers). It just seems clunky and misplaced. I'd make it a different color, and maybe consider making the colored portion of the collar smaller. HURRICANES | PANTHERS | WHITE SOX | WOLFPACK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted January 14, 2010 Author Share Posted January 14, 2010 Alright, Rhinos update:Primary: -added more highlights thus defining facial features -created a thicker navy outline -fixed the mouth to make it look less awkwardUniforms: -changed the white collars on home and alt. to gray Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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