BrandMooreArt Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 ive had this idea for a long time, and thought it was finally time to execute it. my idea though, is just this logo. i dont know if it would work best for a baseball, hockey, basketball or other team. while i think about that, id like to share the first version. colors always subject to change GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuchoTrain Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 my first reaction was that the beak appears too pointy and thin for a duck...almost thought it was a basic bird of some sort.other than that, I really like the illustration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the swed Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 I think it's eye catching, iconic and it would work best for a minor league team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 Yes, very eye-catching. Those outlines need to be thickened, and that thin black outline is really irrelevant, doesn't serve much purpose. I suggest filling in the shape gray, so that the bird has a gray outline connected to it. Great work though, BrandN, glad to know there's another doodler here on these boards. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 Just thicken up the beak and you got yourself one heck of a concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spearhead Posted March 5, 2010 Share Posted March 5, 2010 Yes, that bill looks more like Bob Hope's schnoz that a wide, flat bill. Change it and you've got something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted March 6, 2010 Author Share Posted March 6, 2010 thanks for the feedback everyone. instead of fixing the bill, what if i changed the colors and made it a woodpecker? GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elsephen Posted March 6, 2010 Share Posted March 6, 2010 ^That'd be cool.Or you could just slightly tweak the beak. Doesn't have to be donald duck'ish. Their beaks aren't as flat as people exaggerate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted March 6, 2010 Share Posted March 6, 2010 thanks for the feedback everyone. instead of fixing the bill, what if i changed the colors and made it a woodpecker?a woodpecker was actually the first thing I thought of when I saw it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted March 8, 2010 Author Share Posted March 8, 2010 im working on a woodpecker version, but thought id throw this in here too GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapeeko Posted March 8, 2010 Share Posted March 8, 2010 This would look a ton better as a woodpecker. Looking forward to the final product! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikePho3niX Posted March 9, 2010 Share Posted March 9, 2010 I like that you're Sketch had the Duck looking Up and away not at you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted March 10, 2010 Author Share Posted March 10, 2010 heres the woodpecker version. i know Fightin' Flockers isnt the best nickname ever, but its only temporary till i think of something better. im open to ideas on that as well. Mike, i agree the eyes look better looking straight instead of at the viewer i will work on that too. the colors are more vibrant in the Ai file, my screenshot PNGs are taking away some saturation GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted March 10, 2010 Share Posted March 10, 2010 I think that name is very original, maybe flip the bird the other way so that you're able to put Fightin' Flockers from left to right in the logo, though. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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