Jahgee Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 I wanted to do a Sounders concept that featured Electricity prominantly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RuffDawg Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Okay, constructive criticism it is. I'm sure you get this a lot but this looks rushed, like you sublimated a Starbucks logo onto a jersey and were so proud of yourself that you couldn't wait to show it off. If you want to get really particular, the nameplate is too high, the sponsor logo is too high and too large and it's missing everything else that would identify this as a kit worn by a team that plays in any established professional soccer league (team logo, sleeve patches, etc.)Again... constructive criticism. I'm not trolling you or ripping on your concept for the hell of it. There comes a point when you don't stand for the constant heartbreak anymore, and walk away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Beginning to sound like a broken record here, but slow down. Pay attention to dimensions, placement, and proportions. Would a last name longer than 7 letters fit on this template? Probably not. You have to think about things like that. Other than that, I agree with everything RuffDawg said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Let's look on the bright side- you got the numbers an appropriate size and position!Other than that not much to say that hasn't already been said. You always say that you will take c&c and improve apon your concepts, but never do. I'm just done trying to "help". And I don't care if I sound harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dfwabel Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Constructive criticism: Stop using goofy, misleading titles just to get people to view outside of your "self-bumping". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Constructive criticism: Stop using goofy, misleading titles just to get people to view outside of your "self-bumping".+1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 This five-minute, fill bucket, piece-of- "concept" bumped my thought-out and well-executed college football thread off of the first page.This is all I have to say. Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 This is your last warning.No more vague titled threads making reference to others, and no more concepts that are just fill-bucket extravaganzas.Any more and they will be graveyarded immediately. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RuffDawg Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 This five-minute, fill bucket, piece-of- "concept" bumped my thought-out and well-executed college football thread off of the first page.Took care of that. That series of yours is well worth paying attention to. There comes a point when you don't stand for the constant heartbreak anymore, and walk away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbannon92 Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 This five-minute, fill bucket, piece-of- "concept" bumped my thought-out and well-executed college football thread off of the first page.Took care of that. That series of yours is well worth paying attention to.Thanks man. And I appreciate the compliment. Nike + CFL 2015 | 2015-16 NBA Concepts | Complete College Football Redesign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Let's look on the bright side- you got the numbers an appropriate size and position!Other than that not much to say that hasn't already been said. You always say that you will take c&c and improve apon your concepts, but never do. I'm just done trying to "help". And I don't care if I sound harsh.No. numbers are too big and much down in shirts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missouri tigers Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 Sorry for trying to be optomistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xiaolin Posted July 26, 2011 Share Posted July 26, 2011 No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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